All Comments on 'Losers Can't Be Choosers Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
To short

This one lacked any erotica. Was a big disappointment.Please make next chapter sexy and longer

SBstoriesSBstoriesover 5 years agoAuthor
The next two chapters...

... are already written and available elsewhere, and spice things up a lot. While I understand your disappointment, I took the opportunity to develop the characters a bit more because that's key for what happens next. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Enjoyable!

I’ve been enjoying this entire series. I love what you’re doing with the characters and enthusiastic to see where each unique chapter goes.

SBstoriesSBstoriesover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

... for the kind words.

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 5 years ago
Love it

This story is getting good I can't quit reading.

SBstoriesSBstoriesover 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

... once again.

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