I think that this is the most erotic story I have ever read. It could have a second or even a third chapter to tell more of this story. Maybe even get the sister envolved?
by
Anonymous04/02/05
Oh My!
Possibly the hottest story I ever read. Making the Mom so hot (as mine is) was a stroke of genius and I'm quite sure the fantasy of many! Thanks for sharing!
by
Anonymous04/02/05
Great story
Keep up the good work, one of the best in a long time.
by
Anonymous04/03/05
Close to home-literally.
Super hot story that a Houstonian really appreciates.WOW!!
I was checking back on jack_straw, and found this swell story. I seem to have missed it when it was new :-(.
I have no doubt, you'll have a lot more and I'll read a lot of them.
Thanks
John
by
Anonymous11/16/05
Great story
One of the hotest stories I have read in longtime
by
Anonymous01/11/06
give us some more of mom secret life
good clean fun story.
by
Anonymous01/18/06
Worlds Greatest
I have been through a lot of stories with similar context and its all yawn yawn yawn (same old story and sequence) BUT NOT YOURS, yours is very original, refreshing and amazingly tantalising, honestly the best story i have read on Literotica, keep up the good work!!
This is a great and very hot! The mother and son relationship is excellently portrayed.
I am very glad I found it.
by
Anonymous12/17/10
Couldn't even finish reading it...
Ok... the story might be alright if you're able to totally ignore logic.
As for me, the story is so impossible to believe that I didn't get close to how he set it up or to wherever it was that he fucks her. For me, a story has to be believable. Before I even got into it, I saw that this one is not.
Here it is..... She's hit on by men in everyday life as well as all her husband's co-workers.... she isn't getting any cock at home but she turns them all down because she's a nice girl who just loves to fuck. BUT..... she thinks nothing of working and becoming known as the most hot ass stripper in the area and a call girl for precisely the caliber of people that her husband works with. (??!!) Now that makes great fucking sense, doesn't it? So now we have to believe that, in the three years she's worked at that club and built her hot reputation, (which certainly caused others to bring their friends to see her and fuck her... more risk of exposure) we're supposed to believe that she didn't get hooked up with and fucked by at least a few of her husband's co-workers who came there and recognized her and then blackmailed her into fucking them for free to keep their mouths shut about what she does when she's not being a good little wife and mother. (??!! again, double)
In reality.... A smart woman in her circumstance might have selected three or four long term lovers to give her pussy a variety of cocks but she would never, not EVER, take the blatantly stupid risk that this one did. She'd be smart enough to know that, sooner or later, openly displaying herself and fucking whoever put up the cash for her services would POSITIVELY be discovered and she'd lose her home and family... and especially the respect of her kids.
It was a good story. I appreciated the way you developed the husband. I really hate to see a woman cheating on her spouse, especially with his/her son, when the man is out working to provide for them both. However, this guy deserved whatever she did. I had the impression that he might have even been OK with it if he had known.
I also could appreciate your description of how she chose this path to avoid the emotional entanglements of "standard" affairs. Also, if you know Houston, you know that her work place was completely separated from her home base so the chances of running into her husbands acquaintances were remote. That made it more believable.
The one small issue I had appeared to be one slip given the locale. There is no way in hell that a guy raised in Katy would ever use the expression "Not bloody Likely". Maybe "No fucking way" or "Not a chance" (or No Way in Hell).
Y'all come see us in Texas and thanks for the good read.
by
Anonymous07/27/13
Sad commentary on modern America
That so many of you would condone it. On one level, MAYBE pretending the problem doesn't exist is a mature and considerate solution to the situation of mis matched sexuality.. But in the end you still have a spouse lieing to the other, and a disrespectful child with no gratitude for the upper middle class life his dad gave him. Hell even if they were divorced it would be better. No matter how much of a geek the dad is, could you ever trust the son and be his bud if knew what he was doing. MFer is one of the ultimate insults for a reason. OTOH it is just a stroke story and well written. Props to the author. OldBear.
awesome story i think wouldve been alot better if mom was just a stripper and not a whore and finally left it all behind for her loving son and whats up with screening for diseases you never know what people have after there test and it shouldve scared mom to to that and let her son in bareback after hope more is cumming soon ill probly read it again keep up the good work
stories so friggin hot i had to read it again i hope theres another chapter cumming soon as its an awesome story keep it going
by
Anonymous11/06/15
love for mother heaven
yes its heaven,finaly its so satisfying that he and she love each other so much.mom and child belong to each other.whoever she is a mother is always a mother.Thats the heaven for the child
by
Anonymous07/11/16
Nice
Enjoyed this story and would hope to read more about mom and son even bring daughter into it with all three doing each other. Lots of possibilities as mom would blend into the role of submissive mom.
Loved It.
I think that this is the most erotic story I have ever read. It could have a second or even a third chapter to tell more of this story. Maybe even get the sister envolved?
Oh My!
Possibly the hottest story I ever read. Making the Mom so hot (as mine is) was a stroke of genius and I'm quite sure the fantasy of many! Thanks for sharing!
Great story
Keep up the good work, one of the best in a long time.
Close to home-literally.
Super hot story that a Houstonian really appreciates.WOW!!
Real good!
I was checking back on jack_straw, and found this swell story. I seem to have missed it when it was new :-(.
I have no doubt, you'll have a lot more and I'll read a lot of them.
Thanks
John
Great story
One of the hotest stories I have read in longtime
give us some more of mom secret life
good clean fun story.
Worlds Greatest
I have been through a lot of stories with similar context and its all yawn yawn yawn (same old story and sequence) BUT NOT YOURS, yours is very original, refreshing and amazingly tantalising, honestly the best story i have read on Literotica, keep up the good work!!
Whoa, baby!
This is a great and very hot! The mother and son relationship is excellently portrayed.
I am very glad I found it.
Couldn't even finish reading it...
Ok... the story might be alright if you're able to totally ignore logic.
As for me, the story is so impossible to believe that I didn't get close to how he set it up or to wherever it was that he fucks her. For me, a story has to be believable. Before I even got into it, I saw that this one is not.
Here it is..... She's hit on by men in everyday life as well as all her husband's co-workers.... she isn't getting any cock at home but she turns them all down because she's a nice girl who just loves to fuck. BUT..... she thinks nothing of working and becoming known as the most hot ass stripper in the area and a call girl for precisely the caliber of people that her husband works with. (??!!) Now that makes great fucking sense, doesn't it? So now we have to believe that, in the three years she's worked at that club and built her hot reputation, (which certainly caused others to bring their friends to see her and fuck her... more risk of exposure) we're supposed to believe that she didn't get hooked up with and fucked by at least a few of her husband's co-workers who came there and recognized her and then blackmailed her into fucking them for free to keep their mouths shut about what she does when she's not being a good little wife and mother. (??!! again, double)
In reality.... A smart woman in her circumstance might have selected three or four long term lovers to give her pussy a variety of cocks but she would never, not EVER, take the blatantly stupid risk that this one did. She'd be smart enough to know that, sooner or later, openly displaying herself and fucking whoever put up the cash for her services would POSITIVELY be discovered and she'd lose her home and family... and especially the respect of her kids.
Good Story With One Minor Issue
It was a good story. I appreciated the way you developed the husband. I really hate to see a woman cheating on her spouse, especially with his/her son, when the man is out working to provide for them both. However, this guy deserved whatever she did. I had the impression that he might have even been OK with it if he had known.
I also could appreciate your description of how she chose this path to avoid the emotional entanglements of "standard" affairs. Also, if you know Houston, you know that her work place was completely separated from her home base so the chances of running into her husbands acquaintances were remote. That made it more believable.
The one small issue I had appeared to be one slip given the locale. There is no way in hell that a guy raised in Katy would ever use the expression "Not bloody Likely". Maybe "No fucking way" or "Not a chance" (or No Way in Hell).
Y'all come see us in Texas and thanks for the good read.
Sad commentary on modern America
That so many of you would condone it. On one level, MAYBE pretending the problem doesn't exist is a mature and considerate solution to the situation of mis matched sexuality.. But in the end you still have a spouse lieing to the other, and a disrespectful child with no gratitude for the upper middle class life his dad gave him. Hell even if they were divorced it would be better. No matter how much of a geek the dad is, could you ever trust the son and be his bud if knew what he was doing. MFer is one of the ultimate insults for a reason. OTOH it is just a stroke story and well written. Props to the author. OldBear.
great story
enjoyed it very much i loved at the end that mom wanted to give up whoring and be with her son its so hot hope theres more to this story
had to read it again
awesome story i think wouldve been alot better if mom was just a stripper and not a whore and finally left it all behind for her loving son and whats up with screening for diseases you never know what people have after there test and it shouldve scared mom to to that and let her son in bareback after hope more is cumming soon ill probly read it again keep up the good work
Hot story. Personally I would have liked it more if the mom had a set of big titties but that's just me. I love big fat boobs.
had to again
stories so friggin hot i had to read it again i hope theres another chapter cumming soon as its an awesome story keep it going
love for mother heaven
yes its heaven,finaly its so satisfying that he and she love each other so much.mom and child belong to each other.whoever she is a mother is always a mother.Thats the heaven for the child
Nice
Enjoyed this story and would hope to read more about mom and son even bring daughter into it with all three doing each other. Lots of possibilities as mom would blend into the role of submissive mom.
Keep writing
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