All Comments on 'Tiny John Pt. 02: My First, Meagan'

I really hope you continue these. I've become more and more interested in sph, though I've found a more playful teasing style to be far more intriguing. Most of the stories you come across have such a heavy humiliation bias that this kind of subtlety and honesty is incredibly hot. Also, since this all appears to be you retelling your real world experiences makes it all the better. Keep up the good work.

I think the previous commenter hit it on the head (ouch) your writing is nice but could use a little editing. The story is really good. I figure if it starts at your teenage years and there is any truth in it then you have a lot more stories about SPH and Exhibitionism.

Keep writing.

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