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not bad at all
but I'm iffy about that first line. The rest of the stanza is quite good.
I was
going to leave a comment but the critic in me ...
is in denial~ (wouldn't that be me?)
loved the poem...
I love
that first line.
I love the first verse
This is a great poem TT..it's great to see you back.
These two verses really hit home with me.
~as truth becomes blurred by need
loss is transformed into gain
yet emptiness still fills one's heart
despite trying to wash it clean
with a flood of tears
Three thousand miles
between two realities
I carry one in each hand
which one I open depends
where I think I'm headed ~
That's just truth, plain and simple
excellent poem
welcome back
Bam!
Where did you come from tt2u? Blazed in with this one. I enjoyed the language throughout. That close is excellent,
Good job
Great to see you back writing, tung!
A well-written and clever piece.
Fly
Welcome
to my little corner of the universe. I should probably tell you, I am the queen here.
Syn
Whoa!
Very well done! ~Imp
From Under the Bridge
Sophomoric at best
~~
A chuckle in those first two lines so perfectly describing that odd state.
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,000 poems.
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