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Risque River Day

byEmber Faye©
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by MaverickMan03/31/05

great story

I probably shouldn't be posting comments, since I was involved in editing this. But I thought it was a great story in the unedited version as well. Wonderful imagery, made me want to be there with you.

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by Jennxxx03/31/05

Well done!

I thought it was very sweet yet entirely sexy at the same time. It's nice to read something that doesn't turn me on by it's shock factor. Well written Ms. Ember.

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by Bridget6904/01/05

Nice.

Tastefully written with great descriptions and atmosphere.

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