My Irish Virgin

Excellent story

I thought the dialogue seemed a bit stilted and formal in places, but otherwise, this was one of the best stories I've read in months. Great job!

Sweet story

WHAT A SWEET, SWEET STORY!Very nice to read a SOFT story, not hard and as graphic!

You Spoil Us

These great stories of yours make most of the others seem drab. Thank you for sharing them.

Just a wonderful story

Romantic. Sweet. Sexy. That about says it all. Thank you.

Cat5 is the best

This is another of Cat5's romances. Each one seems better than the last. NO ONE writes better romanctic stories on Literotica than Cat5. This is a lovely little story told with feeling: just beautifully written.

Great Love Story

Great story. Normally I just use an erotic story for masturbation and stop reading after I orgasm. I finished the entire story and realized I had tears in my eyes at the end.

Your are to be commended for making a grown man cry.

A Nice Romance Story

A Great Romance Story. Beautifully written, I will look foward to reading more of your submissions.

Beautiful !!!!!

This is such a great story.....so few can tug at your heart & bring tears to your eyes.
Keep up the wonderful work Cat!!

This was OK

I enjoyed the story but it was not as good as some of the others you have written. Your characterization of the dour, ill-fated and sheltered Irish girl who finds love was a bit too contrite. And her employer thinks that getting her laid was a perfect perscription for her passage into adulthood. C'mon.
It would have been better to have eliminated Carol and stretched the story out so that their laison was more natural. Besides, you've chosen an Irish lass without any religious aspects to her character or world view. Which part of ireland is she from? The goth part? You presented two virgins as hungry for sex irrespective of the circumstance. Sorry, I didn't buy it.

Beautiful, Beautiful Story

I echo all of the other comments about your great story. Ain't Love Grand!

A beautiful, beautiful story

This story has an almost perfect balance between romance and sex. It is so wonderful to read an erotic story, this is not wham, bang, thank you maam.
It is the best story I have read at least this year.
Keep up the good work!
Kindest regards,
Asgard

Wonderful

So full of everything to get you off

Wonderful story

a grear blend of romance and sex. I see I will have to make time to read your other stories.

Thanks,

Adam

Applause

Finally a story in which the characters count more than the action. And they don't just go their own seperate ways at the end. If there was a higher rating than 100, I would give it to this story, as it was a truely satisfying read.

Best ever

This may be the best story I have ever read on this site or any other. This was truly an erotic adventure into the wonderful fulfillment of two lives

A lovely piece of work

A lovely story which rang all the right bells. If I have one complaint, I would have liked it to have been longer!

Wonderful!

I can only agree with everyone--It was a beautiful story!

Romantic AND Erotic!

I felt moved by the romantic aspect of this story, enough so that I felt feelings for the girl. More than just simple erotica!

great

this story was like perfect pie had all the ingredients to make a best seller

Perfect

I have read thousands of stories but none as moving and beautiful as this. Can't give it the score in deserves because it tops the charts. Thanks for the work of art.

Outstanding!

one of the best stories I have read. Great job

beautiful romance and really hot

great job ihope you continue with this story.

Very nice!

Well done!

Wonderful

Best I've read on the site

Wow - what a beautiful deflortaion event!

Seldom have I read a more sensitively produced story of the absolutely intimate act of deflorastion! Beautifully told and highly erotic too! Thanks!

Oy!

That's the worst portrayal of an Irish immigrant I've ever read. You coulda called Pattie McTittiesand it wouldn't have been worse. The Irish speak English naturally, with an obvious brogue. I'm not trying to blow the story to smithereens; the sex was great, as was the romance, but the naivete of the immigrant girl was over the top. Also, try to vary forms of address- people don't call each other by name at the end of every sentence. I think you have talent, don't get me wrong, but this story is ruined by a lack of editing and research.

Fantabulous

What an awsome story i really enjoyed it alot.
Gave a good description of it all!!!

An A Plus

Really after a long time I have read a good erotica. It is more than just a erotic story. Although there are some factual flaws. But never mind.

Its absolutely fantastic...........

The way you natrated the story was brilliant .I hope to find a irish grl like that.but cannot run around for 4 weeks

Irish?

Are you sure she was irish? Writing to you from Dublin, I can tell you that all country girls in Irelands tend to be on the slutty side, for them sex is a pass time. The more rural the area, the more time they spend having sex so anyone from ballybunion is goin to be experienced ;) Also , no irish girl is that naive after the age of 10. Apart from that great story!

Awesome story!

Really turned me on. Keep up the good work.

WONDERFUL

I like the story, wish the author does well!!

Awesome!!

Great story, hope to see more in the future. Enjoyed it alot! :)

Hated it!

That has got to be the wost portrayal of an Irish woman ever! What century do you live in?? You seem to think Ireland is still in the 1800s anyway. You have obviously never visited Ireland.

Its just so typical American where you are great, you have everything and you know everything while the poor Irish have nothing and are totally helpless! It seems to be some sort of superiority complex some of you have.

I think this should be an example of why people should only write about what they know!

Very Cute

Such a cute sweet story. I love your characters.

Give the guy a break

I read the comments and the ones that rag on the writer about not knowing Irish girls and/or Ireland is out of line.. The writer did state at the biginning that the girls parents were dead and that she lived with family prior to coming to America.. I have been to Ireland, the Irish people are great. They do, infact, speak English..
As with any Country, there are some females that are sheltered fron the get go.. I felt that the story, while a little on the "cheesy" side was well thought out, had a good story line etc... So writer, do another chapter of this story, It is following the usual lines of happily ever after...

So good, I had to reread it!

Fantastic story! I read it a few years back and then at some point remembered it and even tried looking for it. Didn't find it the first few times but then today gave it another shot and glad to have found it. I had a great pleasure rereading it, it's a wonderful sweet story. Thank you so much! Please keep on writing similar wonderful stories.

For Love of a Virgin

Great, great story! A gently developed friendship finally turns into RED HOT SEX, helped along by a well-known sex ed vid and genuinely giving love. It's absolutely delicious! Thank you!!

Too Sappy For Lit

Although the story would be great for a romance novel, i dont see it as erotica. Should have done a bit more editing and research as well. Characters were totally unbelievable. I was a virgin myself till i was 19 and i was nowhere near that sheltered. This is a modern day story. Not something from a million years ago. Thanks for playing. Try harder next time....

My Wild Irish Rose

The HOT SEX between two nice young people is well described in this fine story. The Mom and Pop doctors are improbable & unrealistic. But the growth of the boy and girl through friendship into passion is gentle, and warm, and finally toe-curling. I LIKE IT!

well done

The story was good and the characters somewhat believable. The author tends to have trouble identifying thr speaker by repeating names too often, but is otherwise excellent. I would advise the readers that rave about this to always check the sex of the author. Female authors tend to be so much more realistic and less crude than guys, who aim at satisfying the kids that need a masterbation boost. This is an erotic site, not a fuck site!

well done

The story was good and the characters somewhat believable. The author tends to have trouble identifying thr speaker by repeating names too often, but is otherwise excellent. I would advise the readers that rave about this to always check the sex of the author. Female authors tend to be so much more realistic and less crude than guys, who aim at satisfying the kids that need a masterbation boost. This is an erotic site, not a fuck site!

A good read, not your best story, though

I agree with some of the other commenters that Nora's naivete is way, way over the top. C'mon, this is the 21st century, and to think that neither of the protagonists had watched porn is ridiculous. Also, the Carol character wanting Nora to get some is a bit preposterous, not to mention disturbing.
The good parts include how they meet, the slow build up of their relationship, and the sex scenes (for the most part). What I don't like about your sex scenes is that the characters come really quickly, it seems, but I suppose that's appropriate for a story about first timers. It just seems that there could be more description of what they're thinking and feeling rather than the guy is in the female and they're both coming a paragraph later. It doesn't work like that, especially not for women.

As a fantasy, it was great

I couldn't have dreamed up a more romantic or erotic fantasy. Since the stories published here are 99.4% fantasies, it fits right in. My Irish Virgin seemed like a Hallmark Channel story with a mature rating--good though. I enjoyed it.

Five plus

Excellently done story! Sequel, please? Perhaps the run-up to the marriage?

This is the best "first time" story I've read so far. The characters are really good. I hope there is an marriage in this story. I believe the two characters love each other.

Sequal please!

Yes, please continue the story with college and marriage. Excellent, sweet story.

Please keep the story going...

This is an excellent startto what could be a fantastic series, please write more..

Does she have a sister?

If so, send her around to meet me. This is a wonderful story, showing the sweet side of seduction, and lovemaking as opposed to raw sex. The fact that they were both virgins makes it all the more special.

But the story is really about so much more than seduction, and you have somehow used very simple dialogue to convey deep emotional development.

I, too, hope you flesh this out. You could have the makings of a novel here. Go for it!

Great

One of the best stories I have read. Would like to see more like this.