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Ellie's Charms

byChimney Sweep©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/31/05

nice narative

loved reading it.

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by Anonymous02/05/08

Fun

Too bad I never had those fun times in summer camp.

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by Anonymous12/29/08

Not Bad!

Started slow but got much better. It even has a hint of truth to it...I wonder how much of that is real and how much is BS.

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by Anonymous03/29/10

Well written - Hot

You have an interesting and enjoyable writing style. The story built beautifully as you presented believable and highly erotic visual images. I also shall remember this story with pleasure.

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