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by WickedEve03/24/05

may I be honest?

You had something really good going there with those first 3 stanzas. The last two really detract from the potential beauty of the poem. By the way, the title is brilliant.

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by Anonymous03/25/05

Oh Art

I have done this before, a super idea. I loved the whole poem ;)

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