All Comments on 'Crossing The Line'

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300bowler300300bowler300over 5 years ago
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GREAT START, BUT YOU NEED TO GO BACK, SO YOU CAN REALLY BECOME THE WOMAN YOU WANT TO BE...! BETTY jo xoxo

cdmonicacdmonicaover 5 years ago
Lucky girl

A great beginning. I have felt many of the same emotions and I love it every time. I hope to read more from you and I hope you can expand on your journey to girlhood.

mm32217mm32217over 5 years ago
Hope to see the next installment!!!

Great job. Your writing style is easy to read. As it progressed, you seem to have touched on many of the inner feelings that harmonize with my own limited experiences. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter.

MarieJoanneMarieJoanneover 5 years ago
Beautiful

I too have had similar fantasies xxx Marie

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