I loved it! You have a great talent, keep writing. It was a great fantasy story! It was so hot!
That was such a fun read. I can see so many possibilities for additional exhibits! Nicely done, thanks.
There was nothing predictable about this story. And I enjoyed the scene you played out, very intriguing. I would love to see this story line explored further :-)
Itself viewed through a mirror!
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Outstanding!
I loved it! You have a great talent, keep writing. It was a great fantasy story! It was so hot!
Great fun!
That was such a fun read. I can see so many possibilities for additional exhibits! Nicely done, thanks.
Enjoyable twist
There was nothing predictable about this story. And I enjoyed the scene you played out, very intriguing. I would love to see this story line explored further :-)
A portrait of life....
Itself viewed through a mirror!
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