by Kelly M.
I think that now is the time for some REVENGE.. Maybe turn Victoria into a cock loving whore!!!!!!!! REVENGE time...
Paul
This junk belongs in the BDSM category.There may be lesbian sex involved, but it's not about that.
I read it with the hope that it would get away from the way it was going, so I was disappointed.
I think this is quite a romantic story. I imagine, as their budding relationship develops, these two caressing and kissing each other in front of a warm fireplace, having delicious candlelight dinners, taking long walks on a moonlit beach, and having quiet talks in cozy coffee shops.
kwas1modem@yahoo.com
Wow, please continue this story there just has to be more. I loved how hot this story is and the way it progressed.
It seems that in part one she should have tried an old boyfriend (or even her ex-) in a desparate attempt to cum before succumbing to the humiliation of her Domme. Even that would have been more humiliation since she would have had a tried an true partner who should have been able to get her off but instead made her cry and didn't know why. This is one of the best lesbian D/s I've read.
I love the dirty talking and the teasing. Very pretty images.
realy hot when can wehave some more episodes to this wonderfull story. maybe introducing the daughter in to the plot as well
This story is definitely one of the hottests ever. I beg you to keep it going and others in this vein!!! Thank you!!!
I didn't even read it. I read the first paragraph and the last one and it's all just stupid. It's the worst story I've ever read here. If I could delete it, I would.
This story could only have been written by a psychotic lesbian or a psychotic madman.
I love the theme of modifcation so we need a continuation please. How big can she get her nipples and labia in the name of cum?
please please please
Incredible insight to the slaves mind. Wonderfully twisted. Desperately wish there was more
kelly got turned, and she loves it, so I. good story and i hope you add more. ow its time to bring Kellys 28 year old daughter to the party.
Hello- you did an EXCELLENT job to show the emotion and grit between the females. Very good writing!! Thanks Jay
jaymcgregor@bellsouth.net