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I'm your eternal fan
This is a remarkable poem and Rhino's drawing accentuates the imagery so well. They compliment one another perfectly. Keep on writin'.
beautiful
love the poem, the photo brings to mind his description of his island. Beautifully written, You are a natural talent.
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A beautiful poem and a beautiful sentiment. Love it!
Nice pairing...
I love the way that the words and illustration enhance one another.
Nicely done
your words and Rhino's illustration take on a wonderful marriage! Great job..
~Honey
The fruit of his labor.
Both the poem and accompanying illustration nicely convey the enjoyment of fulfilling and anticipated consumption.
Subtly Sexy
A wonderful poem that went with the drawing. It was an instant classic. This poem and drawing will stay wiyh me for a long time.
wow!
logo, this is wonderful! I love the imagery, even without rhinoguy's illustration. This poem, expanded, could have been a good story, but you kept it sparse, sharply worded, and oh-so-erotic! Nice job!
love
Rhinoguy's illustration provides the dessert. The poem ~ a sweet gift to the man she loves. Endearing and quite charming!
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Sounds like the perfect offering, succulent and sweet.
Blimey!
I mean . . . Blimey!
THE GIVER IS BETTER
for the receiver taking, TK U MLJ LV NV
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