All Comments on 'Difficulty Adjusting to Treatment Ch. 01'

by CandaK

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Stupid story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It's so-so

I'm sorry, but that was a weak start. I really hope you have something better planned for this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Do your best and keep writing

My honest opinion, decent start, but because it only one page was posted, I'm a little disappointed. The reasons others are being rude is because they were horny, and expected more action. As a fellow writer, I simply suggest posting the entire story once it is written for better feedback.

ptebadenptebadenover 5 years ago
Interesting begining

Waiting for more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
<3

I think it was good, you should continue. It seems like it’ll be a decent story.

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