All Comments on 'Happy Accident Ch. 02'

Second part is much more amusing than the first one, a drow and her pet tentacle monster :D

I'd gladly read more about their adventures.

Thank you very much for commenting! While I will be getting back to this series, I'm actually planning a series of shorter stories playing around with monster girls. What do you think?

Lit has been blocking me from commenting often.

I think with your skills, you would surely accomplish that. Monster girls are always welcome here, I guess :)

Thank you for thinking so. While I'm editing the first chapter, I'll be putting out some other works as well, just so I don't get rusty.

This reminds me of dnd, I'll never be able to play a drow the same way again lol. I usually play male drow though, which is funny and awkward when females try to flirt with him.

I love that you play D&D. How do your male drow characters respond to flirts and romantic overtures, if I may ask? One would think they would reflexively submit.

You have a talent and some great ideas (loved him doing his own anal), however there are some structural faults you need to sort out: switching between tenses, and the constant pov changes. Both of these can be disruptive for the reader.

Hope you keep going with your world. Good luck.