All Comments on 'Call Me Sir'

by starbellybrat

Sort by:
  • 5 Comments
1dirtyoldman11dirtyoldman1about 19 years ago
Taking the first step

Your story was well written and has a lot of feeling, fear, dread of the unknown , waiting for what comes next, knowing that you have no say. I hope that the follow up is as good as this.

You must learn your place and the respect of your master before you truly will enjoy the new life style that you have chossen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Hot

Excellent story.......am looking forward to the sequel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Made my pussy very wet and achy

I can't wait for the sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Well Done

Great Story, starbellybrat...Writing in the first person is always a challenge and you did it well...Particulaly enjoyed the dialogue. Be Good and Take Care.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good start

My favorite part:"You will not cum! Do you hear me? You will not cum until I tell you that you are to cum. You are here for my pleasure and I will do with you as I please. Your pleasure is secondary,"

Too many stories result in her getting pleasure, & it is the purpose of a sub to provide pleasure, & if she is pleasured it comes from knowing how satisfied the Master.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous