Your story was well written and has a lot of feeling, fear, dread of the unknown , waiting for what comes next, knowing that you have no say. I hope that the follow up is as good as this.
You must learn your place and the respect of your master before you truly will enjoy the new life style that you have chossen.
Excellent story.......am looking forward to the sequel
I can't wait for the sequel
Great Story, starbellybrat...Writing in the first person is always a challenge and you did it well...Particulaly enjoyed the dialogue. Be Good and Take Care.
My favorite part:"You will not cum! Do you hear me? You will not cum until I tell you that you are to cum. You are here for my pleasure and I will do with you as I please. Your pleasure is secondary,"
Too many stories result in her getting pleasure, & it is the purpose of a sub to provide pleasure, & if she is pleasured it comes from knowing how satisfied the Master.
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