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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Too short!

The Story is great but it is way to short! I hope there will be a second part.

jsmangisjsmangisover 5 years ago
Very Hot

Excellent first story. I was a bit short, so I hope you finish the store in an additional chapter(s).

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Big fun

Very well done. The narrator mentions that he's stopped caring what people think of him, then tells his story in just that way.

Wayne48Wayne48over 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I appreciate the feedback! Makes me want to write another, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story!

Nicely done, appreciate the effort. M/F/K was a believable add to the story. Made it stand out for me.

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