by Wayne48
The Story is great but it is way to short! I hope there will be a second part.
Excellent first story. I was a bit short, so I hope you finish the store in an additional chapter(s).
Very well done. The narrator mentions that he's stopped caring what people think of him, then tells his story in just that way.
I appreciate the feedback! Makes me want to write another, thank you!
Nicely done, appreciate the effort. M/F/K was a believable add to the story. Made it stand out for me.