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Good Start
But too short, anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Had potential
Your story began with GREAT potential! The idea of her being violated in front of entire club was good. You didn't take it far enough.
Rose
Although it was a little too short, I really enjoyed the story. I would like to read more stories about your humiliation at your favorite club. Spend more time on how your are forced to cum, and little more on character development.
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