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Handcuff Girl Ch. 01

byRosebramble©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/02/05

Good Start

But too short, anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

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by Anonymous04/03/06

Had potential

Your story began with GREAT potential! The idea of her being violated in front of entire club was good. You didn't take it far enough.

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by libertarian10/21/07

Rose

Although it was a little too short, I really enjoyed the story. I would like to read more stories about your humiliation at your favorite club. Spend more time on how your are forced to cum, and little more on character development.

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