Katie's Eden

One HOT Story!

OhMissScarlett, you have simply outdone yourself with this story! Very well written and highly erotic. Although, I am definitely a heterosexual male, I am not afraid to admit my attraction to a little anal play now and again. However, mine has just been limited to tongues and the occaisional finger. I feel a carrot to be a little much for my personal tastes. Nevertheless, I loved this story so much I gave it a five.

Sex in the mud

What a title and useful for what was done. It is very erotic when lovers can do each other sexually. It heats up the action, because of the location where this took place.

Absolutely fuckin' great...

You're the greatest writer of vegetable-anal-penetration porn in the known universe. Superb job.

I love this story down to every last detail. Perv. :D

Oh! to be a carrot!

or an ear of corn. Can i come work for you too? Awesome story and written with a flare that most only hope to emmulate.
Brava!

Fantabulous!

I'll never look at vegetables the same way again. Wonderful story Miss S.

Vegetarianism

takes on a whole new meaning now.
Fantastic, fun, frollicksome, fucking story. Well done.
Mat

Great Story

Wow, great scene. Thanks foe sharing it, Carson reccomended it, and I Am not disapppointed that I took his advise.

Hot Steaming Veggie Sex!

It's good and good for you. Nice piece of work. A nicely drawn protag who I kept visualizing as looking like Reba McEntire, which is a good thing. Makes me glad I fussed at you to get it finished.

Great story

Well written, very erotic, wonderful stuff

Lucky Lars!

He got all the breaks! A beautiful woman and paid to please her! What could be better then this? Not much! Keep them cumin and I will be UP for allot more!

Gettin' down and dirty!

Liked this a lot, nice balance of story and sex.

Earthy...

Passionate, hot and sexy and I loved the traces of real humour insrted into the hot sex play. Brilliant!

Great Sex!

And to think I never liked corn before! Good dialogue, too.

Makes me want a vegetable garden… :D

I don't think I've ever met a protag with quite Katie's appealing mix of down to earth and kinkster. The dialogue, external and internal, was excellent! Very well done! I'm impressed. :)

Delicious

Loved the anal scene :) You write good sex, with, or without vegetables.

hmmmm.... meat and potatoes?

Great story.... I used to hate veggies... but that's almost enough to make me consider eating em all up!!

Yowser

Now I know why I love vegetables. :D Hot, hot, hot! Good luck!

Katie's Orgasmic Produce?

Just loved it. Really great piece of writing. Katie is sexy and funny - and you got real mud for Earth Day!

When do they get to the marrow patch?

Oh MY!!!

Wow...I enjoyed this one...wow...

~Honey

An absolutely delightful read

Had to see what was going to beat me out for the category in March, and I was happy to see that it was a funny and well written story such as this. Congratulations on a wonderful piece of work.

Some Great Moments

In a story that was very hot overall. I like the playful start to their scene, the mischieviousness with the hose. It just got better as it continued. I can see how the texture of an ear of corn could be stimulating. Very original and great work. And I loved this..."My selection of men is limited to divorced guys I went to high school with or married guys I went to high school with." Wonderful line.

What fun!

Sexy and playful and hot. ~Imp

Damn!

Positively delicious.

Well-written and very sexy.

sweetsubsarahh

Best Nasty Submission I've read in a long time

Wow. I've never even commented on a story before but that one was off the charts. Good work.

Hot damn!

That was great. Very well written and very hot. I was glad she got it on with that Swiss professor, I was afraid she was going to settle for sex with the ex. That carrot scene was great. I need to try something like that at home.

Yum

Loved the earthy texture to this story and the graphic anal sex was the cherry on the cake - a winner ...

Dirty

You dirty girl, Scarlett. Very, very bad, but good.

very sexy..and fun

Fun story, good character descriptions and achieved a rise in the 'ol levis. hmmmm carrot scene, oh my.

So hot!

Wow, that was so sexy! The outdoor anal-anal combo was so hot - I used to work on an organic farm and I would have loved to have that happen to me. Great job!

Amazing!

This story is fucking amazing! It is no wonder you were one of the winners!

Wow

Just...

WOW!

Now I'm off to find "Jake." ;-)

Nice one

I'm going vegetable shopping tomorrow... :)

lovely piece (of work)

This story is so hot, and so sweet. Keep it coming!

Hot, Hot, Hot

I'll be back to read this again.

Excellent writing. The mouth, cunt, and ass in the tale are appealing but the brain that crafted the story is the sexiest thing of all. Kudos!

smart and sexy

Great writing...so unusual here!

Very very good.

Hello Miss Scarlett,
I really enjoyed that,I'm about to see if you have more stories for me!
Regards,
Lindsay.

Wonderful

About half way through I became conscious of the writing, setting the scene, making character, creating a time and place - not just a scene - and sat up (didn't stop enjoying :) to read more attentively. Wonderful work, wonderfully literate. Well observed and beautifully written. Now I will pass this along to several friends, which I have never done before with erotica. And not just because I have a vegetable medley fetish, but because this is really a great story. (Markerem@hotmail.com)

more

I need more of this. So beautiful, not to mention well written. Continuation!!!

Miss Scarlett, this is awesome writing!!! The story's great too! Keep on truckin', puhleese!

Hot and smart...!

My favorite combo...really enjoyed it.
Would like to read more...