All Comments on 'Kiss of the Moon'

Your story was well developed, and rather intoxicating. It reminded me of mythology, with the use of Sun and Moon. Very nicely done.

I hope you win the Earth Day contest. It was a deep, sensual story with such beautiful descriptions. You're one of my few favorite authors. Please keep on writing, I enjoy your words!

It's nicely different to have the Moon as a male.

Great story. Good luck.

Your mastery of words shines through with a marvelous entry. Well done! Good luck!

Deep, sensual, playful.

Beautifully done.

Not my usual genre, but I'm glad I read it- you're a great writer! Good luck in the contest.

your stories are addictive and i find myself coming back for more again and again. keep up the *AMAZING* work!! =D

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Your a very talented writer, keep it up. =]

That was such a beautiful story. You drew a picture with your words. I could feel the urgency between them in this in between time when they could meet. I could see give and take of the darkness and light. Thanks for writing it.

So beautiful!!! Wouldn't it be neat to personify all the elements and create stories like these!?

i will never look at dawn or dusk in the same way again xx

Beautiful.

"Break on thru to the other side" The Doors 1967

"Day destroys the night, Night divides the day," Your story was much more elegant and erotic than Jim Morrison's was.

A nice tale of two or four lovers ?