by rodryder44
There is NO star in this mess. Did you even bother to proof read this train wreck? Thoroughly unlikable characters, ugly dialogue and zero plot left us with nothing worth while to read.
No stars.
a marriage created as a farcical comedic skit, TK U MLJV LV NV
what else will he want that Ashley has to provide, TK U MLJ LV NV
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The writing wasn't the best but the situation was pretty good. Loved the fact that everyone got what they wanted out of it. Nothing beats a muscle car and a slutty wife. Cheers!
It's a porn site. No one gives a shit about your politics on here. Go rant somewhere else. This is all about having a slutty wife get some dick.
I stopped there, why the fuck do so many writers, who can only be MEN insist on hitting/hammering the cervix, its fucking painful, doesn't give pleasure, so clearly written by a brain dead male.
would be better, maybe even a negative star. you are fucked up see a shrink 'cause you really need help. paying someone to gain an advantage over your wife is really, really screwed up. NO LOVE THERE asshole
You managed to piss off the whiny little trolls twofold. You wrote about a wife who had sex with another man *gasp* AND you dared to have that be a black man. the horror!
Thanks for that. Maybe a couple of them will have an aneurysm and the frequency of thei bullshit comments will drop off. Even if they don't it's just nice to know they are all fuming and trying to figure out more ways to call this "garbage cuck shit." Keep it up!
There was no cheating in a marriage here. This was not about an idiotic black guy fantasy. This was about humiliation. Fetish shit should be in fetish.
Well, I guess you learnt your lesson. Nobody here has a sense of humour. I thought it was well done and just the right length for its type.
A real romantic tale...Pity it's so bad and sick...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
Cute fun short witty and the bitch finally used as she should be 5 stars.
Actually, I prefer the fastback with manual trans, but every other thing was PERFECT!!
Christ almighty another brain dead hack who doesn’t have a pair of balls. Please give me back the 5 minutes i wasted in your dumbfuck story.
Thank you Mr. Anonymous for saving my 4 and half minutes. I have only wasted 30 seconds to read your comments.
Sounds like something from Jerry Springer!
Survey says...........................FAIL!
Ford made a GT mustang in ‘66? The v-8 engine was a 289cid, not 5 liter
NO broad is worth a 1966 HI-Performance, 271 hp mustang. Than kgod the Bears better half is a lady , not a broad. The Bear DOES NOT approve .0 stars if I could.
The BEAR