All Comments on 'Endangered Ch. 10'

OMG YUSSSSSSS

I enjoy this series far to much, and shall await the next chapter with as much patience as I possess. Keep up the good work.

Really enjoyed this...

Lots of threads woven together into a thoroughly wonderful bout of escapism, sex and thrilling tension.

Can't wait for the next chapter

I started reading this story back in 2014. I reread it in 2016. Then I come back and see more stories to read. I am so exited and I just can’t hide it. This is one of my all time favorite stories. Thank you, thank you for posting more!

Okay, like, really, how do you pull this off? Fantasy, sci-fi and boner-inducing erotica all seamlessly rolled into one story? I'm.......words actually fail me here. I can only stand in awe and salivate, waiting impatiently for the next chapter. Extremely well done!!!!

I can only Second the opinion above: how do you Pull it off? Sex, Fantasy, sci-fi, all in One? Great! Keep it up, One of the best Series in lit!

Damn. Daaamn. Daaaaaaaaaamn.

DAYUM.

That's all I can say lol.

another great story, thank you for another great chapter. OMG I love Amy..,. the last part was so funny... Did he blow up the Moon... ooops did I say that....

This was yet again a superb chapter. The way you crafted the scenes is incredible!

Please keep up the good work!

If you ever get tired of writing this amazing series (hoping that never happens) you would do great writing comedy. That ending press conference had me laughing at 3am so hard my roommate had to come see if I was okay.

Great Chapter as always! Excited to see how the story progresses!

I really dig Hailey's character, it's nice each of the ladies brings something to the group. Was worried when she was first introduced, that from the description she was going to end up being a milky bimbo. It's been pleasant seeing her mentation as well as lactation.

Udderly wonderful.

I really appreciate these comments. Always fun to read... @SensualSigma.

This chapter was a fun one to write and I'm glad you're enjoying it. Already working on the next one.

When the first time Radek stirred shit and the Revelation became inevitable I and many others were sorely disappointed that such a nice story is going to end prematurely, obviously due to lack of imagination by ltpc. Boy, I guess I've never been more wrong in my opinion, and I am so glad for it! I love the story, it's one of the best I've encountered and I am overjoyed every time there's a new submission. Keep up the outstanding work, and I hope you enjoy writing at least as much as we enjoy reading your story!

Nice job 😊

Once again you've outdone yourself, I sooooo much enjoyed this chapter from beginning to end, that, when I reached the last page I was actually mad at you for ending it even though the ending was very good. I just wanted to keep reading and not stop at all.

REALLY good job and I for one cannot wait for chapter 11, hope you're progressing at a very fast pace with the chapter as waiting will be agonizing.

Once again you've delivered, full marks to you.

TK

This is easily one of my top five stories. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see how everything plays out.

Thanks for the chapter made my day to see it posted keep it up

Super excited as always to see a new chapter and it didn't disappoint. Funny, inventive and spellbinding. Keep up the great work. It is truly appreciated.

I’m happy to see another chapter up! And I can’t wait to read what happens next! Hope to see chapter 11 out soon, I will admit I would love to see the next chapter as a respite from the evil of the worlds going ons. And see it focus on Chris and his brood living life instead of worrying about the next horrible event. Like the pregnancies progressing, all the playful banter with Immi, Annabel and Susan, developing Haileys relationship. Finishing/Moving into the new house, and let’s not forget our lovely vampire and Michelle. And maybe developing the relationship with Reyla!

Keep Up The Good Work!!

But this one was lacking in my opinion, you spent next to a quarter of the chapter on or around the moon.

The scenes with him on the moon display a strong grasp of practical physics. That is what makes this chapter truly stunning.

Especially when it's true.

Hey Itpc

I am loving your story man. I really hope you finish it.

One good segestion I have for you is when you finish writing the last chapter of this awesome story, take the time to edit it into something more suitable for all audiances. If you can find a way to keep the sexual relationships in the story without them being so graphic you might be able to get this published as a story for teens. Would love to see your hard work pay off into a good book deal.

Whenever I see a new chapter of endangered I just feel like it's Christmas and I am 12 again. Keep working hard for us readers good sir. Thank You for another wonderful chapter!!!

"Budget cuts, Sir, it's not the sixties"

I laughed so hard at that. That was worth the five stars easily.

And little Amy. She's so smart, knowing that something's not quite right with these people. If this little blurb about Chris blowing up the moon has supposedly blown her mind, the poor girl is going to be beside herself once she finds out what's really going on.

In the past I haven't payed too much attention here in the comments but I'll try to respond to a few...

TREK1: Well that's mission accomplished, no promise on speed for the next chapter. I'm getting busy at work again.

KJay15: I knew that the 'Moon heavy' parts of the chapter wouldn't appeal to everyone. I'm sorry you felt it let the story down, but expect similar stuff at times in future chapters. I could have half-assed the Moon trip, left out a lot of detail, but then what would have been the point?

Thanks for thinking it's good enough to publish as non-erotica. I'm not convinced myself. It sounds like a lot of work, and I personally find harem stories without actual sex to be... well pointless? I'm working toward publishing as an adult book, but there needs to be a re-write of the Susan-Chris relationship to play down the psudo mother-son thing.

Yeah, that's my favourite line in the chapter for sure, possibly the series. I had a good long chuckle when I thought of it.

Once again you've made another great instalment. It was so touching when Lillian finally felt she could come in from the cold and be loved once more. This story is becoming something truly special. Keep up being awesome ltpc

It sucks that good writers like you have to channel your energy somewhere else but that's life. I can just hope it won't take toooo long to submit the next chapter but above all, thank you for being more interactive and comment on what we, your readers, have to say. I hope it will include updates on how you're next chapter/s are doing, it keeps us intrigued and longing for more (even if it frustrates us). It's part of the addiction to your story.

TK

It's hard to believe that this great story is getting better & better with each chapter . The sex is great & the science stuff is a bit beyond me but very important to the overall sense of the story , but to me , at least . it's the humor & personal relationships that make this story a cut above even some of the good tales here . It's nice to see Haliey has brains to go along with her bust , she's a excellent addition to the dragon brood . When you had the scene of Radek show up on the internet the first thing that popped into my mind was to sell it as a new Marvel special effects type movie , (glad to see great minds think alike (patting myself on back lol ) .Very fast thinking & action by Michelle . I hope the rest of the girls cut Lillian a little slack until they can get a schedule down to keep her from starving , her need for his blood & loving magic is different from the rest & 500 yrs of a selfish & demanding nature can't be swept away over night . Thank you again for all your hard work & looking forward to the next installment of your mesmerizing story & also thanks for taking the time to read & react to our ideas & comments .

It just keeps getting better, great story. I just wish the wait was shorter between each chapter, the wait is brutal. I want to know what happens next! Cant wait to see where you take the story.

I mean, damn, why would you want to end a chapter...?

You know how inconvenient it is to have to stop reading what you write...?

Now I have to wait for your next chapter... and not patiently at that, mind you... =)

Sorry dude. It can't be helped.

I have been reading the other comments. In essence everyone love your writing..

And that is why they seem frustrated and impatient when they finish reading..

But I would say, you take your own sweet time.. Well thats why you are able to produce such a wonderful story..

Worth the wait..

Keep going..

From another impatient fan of yours... ;-)

I have devoured the last ten chapters in the last few days. Love this story. I can't wait to learn more about the gargoyle.

FOR A GOOD CAUSE!!!!!!!!!! LMFAO ROFL

I LOVE this story. Thank you for keeping it alive.

So many times here on Literotica I've become totally caught up in a story, only to have the author disappear into the "ether," leaving the story unfinished and me heartbroken.

Love all of the characters, and the details keep the story "believable."

Please please please keep up the good work!

And I was delighted to learn that Chris didn't actually kill anyone when he destroyed that stronghold! I was hoping he'd at least not killed any kids, but no deaths at all? Awesome. Altogether an absolutely excellent chapter. I can't wait to read about the reaction to the video of Chris fixing the flag on the moon! :-D

Awesome! Enough said.

I found this story by mistake on Monday now I can't wait for more chapters.

Thanks. Change that to biologist and you're pretty much spot on.

Still loving the series and cant wait for more chapters. The fusion arc was less interesting becouse we dont know what the practical need for it is.

Hard to add to the preceding comments just know I agree with the positive ones. Also, if my biology teacher would have made class half as entertaining as this story I would have paid a whole lot more attention and maybe gotten a better grade. Great work.

Great chapter. I really can’t wait for more chapters

This story keeps getting better and better, keep it up. Can not wait for more.

Waiting for the next one.....

Maybe before Christmas. Maybe.

It's going to be a VERY LOOOONG wait but worth it. Just do your best Ltpc

Honestly it’s extraordinary in its development and tempo, with just the right amount of real, and slightly far fetched (but still backed by solid thinking and reasoning) elements, to make this hands down one of my favorite stories thus far. You my dear writer, are a poet and scholar of tantalizing word play and story telling. I’m honestly ravenous to read more of this little patch of masterful imagination. So in closing... ya dun good m8.

Wouldn't suddenly making the orb 100m in diameter have cooled the reaction rapidly?

Plus, with all the early experimentation, he forgot to do "self regulation" with this one?

Next time, have him take a couple kilos of as close to atomically pure iron and chuck it into the sphere. Fusing iron CHILLS the process. It uses up several times the energy it releases. Mind, you would have to go past fusing carbon to make it that far...

As someone who's tried to write, I am in awe of the pace, excitement and enthusiasm you manage to get into your story. Even the sex scenes have plot development and surprises.

Thank you. I can't wait 'till the next one.

Yes, you're right that expanding the orb, even a little bit would have cooled the reaction. They also should have put safeguards in place. However, the reaction was much more successful than they were anticipating, and they got caught out. I've already mentioned this a little bit in what I've written of the next chapter.

I think we'll leave the CNO fusion cycle alone for the moment and iron implies supernova-like pressures. Maybe later.

I'm thinking when Chris is being a moronic, "wow this is remarkably stupid, and out of character". Then I remember he is 19, and it's suddenly believable.

I love this story the plot and everything about it breathes amazing, I can’t wAit to see the next chapter in this amazing story, and honestly this story has amazing sex scenes and the best part is the sex is icing on the cake for this amazing story, it’s tied into the heart of the story unlike other posts where it’s forced or there for the hell of it this story makes it seem necessary to the development I mean come on how much better can this story get, I only see this story getting more and more popular never slowing down and hopefully one day we will see this become a novel, which I would happily buy

Yeah, I find myself drawn into the trap of making Chris or the other characters semi-omnipotent at times. This isn't ideal, especially like you said for a 19 year old. Therefore I think it's good to have some mistakes, dumb, honest, or however they end up.

I love this story. I really wish it was an actual book. I could read it over & over. After every chapter I'm like. Damn he needs 2 fuck her. Then the next chapter he does. I love how it's not just about sex also. Lol

I have read this chapter 3 times now and this last time I kept referencing your science used in the moon trip. Besides breaking down the science barney style you actually kept up with current understanding of space and nuclear fusion. I was impressed with your ability to describe a complex interaction of protons, neutrons, electrons, and photons in such a simplistic story interaction. Heck you even used a few words I had to google to check their meaning. The whole moon trip and the following living room scene was one of the best scenes so far. I am dying to know what happens next with Hailey and Chris meeting the president about their moon expedition. I wish you could hurry up and write the next chapter but at the same time I want it to be as well done and detailed as this one was. Part of me is jealous that you write such a wonderful story where I can't. Though if you keep this up I might just push myself to try writing again.

Bravo! Bravo! Good Sir!

Thanks! I had fun trying to make the dry science more interesting for the story whilst keeping it as accurate as possible. Quite a bit of research went into getting all the facts right, increasing my own understanding in the process. Keep up your own writing, you can only improve. I've noticed what I think is substantial gain in my own abilities as I continue to work on every new chapter.

I love this series I re-read the other chapters while you are working on the next one, by far my favorite series on this site keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter

Just checking, how is 11 coming along. I know you said that hopefully it will be out by December (very sad news) but a bit of an update will be helpful.

TK

I made a layout for Chris's cave home based on your description. though I took some artistic liberties and made the design flow better in my opinion.

https://www.literotica.com/i/endangered-chriss-cave-home

I have left this story as a tab on my computer for six months and it has not disappointed. I have no plan to exit it. I can't wait for the next installment!

This is a jewel among all the flotsam that is out there, thank you so much for writing this. I admit to thinking that they were going to the moon to collect a load of H^3 which is abundant up there, not naturally occurring on Earth, and great for fusion reactors, but you went a different way. I am curious to see what comes of it, but I know that if it is written as well as the chapters to date then I will enjoy every second of it.

PLEASE!

I can't wait for the next chapter! This has really become a great story! Thanks for writing it!

I am new to Lit. so I just found this story. I was really excited when I started, because it had 1O chapters so I knew it was a complete work. (I HATE waiting for new chapters!) I read all 10 within 3 days. By the time I got to chapter 10 I knew you weren't finished with it and I was right. NUT BUNNIES! Now I have to wait because there is no way that I want to forgo knowing more! Amazing job ...keep up the good work... and everything else I already heard multiple times already. By the way, I really love Ann and Bartolomew. I just wish we got to read about more time with just the two of them (Chris and Ann) talking everything over like they did in the beginning. She is his first after all. I think she took his going to the moon without their knowledge way too well for how you wrote her personality in the beginning, but I'm hopeful that you're just saving her private blowup at him for the next chapter. PLEASE don't take too long ok? And in case it wasn't clear, I love this story and will buy it when it comes out!!!

Sad news for you, LTPC announced earlier that the next chapter will only be in the new year. I know he writes slow but I'm hoping it will be out soon. No ways I'm dropping him though.

Also check out the following writers. Tefler, Etaski, ElyssaCousland, DrowsDilemma, Surefoot and Erinaceous. All ongoing stories but very good and keep you reading for a long time.

TK

Oops. Looks like my bio hasn't updated at all. Is this correct? I know I've posted at least two since the chapter came out but it doesn't look like they're showing on my author page.

Anyway. Chapter 11 is almost up to 24k words. Pretty slow progress now that I'm in my busy season at work again. I'll keep chipping away when I can and it will eventually add up to something resembling a chapter. Thanks for the patience and support!

I still can't wait for the next chapter!

Reposting my link to the home layout since LTPC informed that my original link is broken.

I made a layout for Chris's cave home based on your description. though I took some artistic liberties and made the design flow better in my opinion.

https://www.literotica.com/i/endangered-chriss-cave-home

Hope that link works better.

Your link doesn't work at all

If you want to look at Turk7Sr home layout you can go to his story page and click on the link there (it works for me)

When I reviewed the comment the space in the link did not exist.

since I don't have any other work on my account it should be easy to find the layout.

I've been following your work for years. I know it takes a lot of time and dedication to your work and you have shown that through your attention to detail but writer to writer you need to pick up how quickly you're putting your chapters out there. Your research is fantastic and you keep me hooked. Honestly I'm more following this story to see where it goes because at this point you took long enough I no longer have to read the story for sexual satifaction because I got married and thusly it ruins some of the fun. Sorry, venting. Back to the speed of your putting out your stories. You probably are losing readers because although your storyline is fantastic and your erotica is both tasteful and satisfying its taking so long to put your chapters out there. Some people, like myself have waited so long for various chapters that its comprable to waiting for book sequels. I understand you are not Steven King or Tolkien but your skill is comprable. Apply yourself a little more to satisfying readers. When you started the story you made an obligation to your readers to finish the story. I had a friend whom ai put onto the story a few years back but sadly he will never get to see the end of it because he died in in accident. I commend you for your work and thank you for writing Itpc. I actually am going to refrain from using my account handle and if you were to reply to me, you don't have to but I would love to hear back from you, you may refer to me as Apocryphon

Thanks for the feedback and support, very flattering.

Unfortunately I can't devote as much time to writing as I'd like due to my job. I'm sorry you feel that way about the chapter release time but there's not that much I can do, especially at this time of the year. I'll do what I can but please be patient.

Just a little more feedback to keep us interested will help a LOT.

TK

So I just signed up on your Patreon. Totally understand the challenges of writing outside the restrictions imposed by living a normal life so to speak!

Loving your story, glad I came across it, also a Patreon supporter of Annabelle Hawthorne’s “Home for Horny Monsters”, and Tefler’s sci-fi horny space opera.

I think Tefler was once in your position… He now gets like $3000 per chapter and I think he has gone to full-time writing mode at this point. Good luck to you!

This is easily one of my favorite series on this site and am excited for the next chapter however long it takes for you to make it. I'm patient though and can wait. Keep up the great work!

Chapter 11 is up to 30k words but progress is slow. I'm super busy with my job at the moment so there's limited time and effort available for writing.

Thanks for the above 3-4 comments of encouragement (as well as others). It makes sitting down and hashing out a scene or two after an exhausting day that much more rewarding.

Great story line! anxiously awaiting next installment however long it takes.

I've read through a couple times what is already posted, and it never fails to enthuse.

Please stick to it. It's a really good read! Thanks so much for sharing.

This is what happens when astrophysicists and fantasy writers get together and decide to snort *all* the coke in the room. I love it.

- Wallstotheball, 2018

Funniest thing I've read for a long time!!!!

Also, ltpc, take your time, but hurry up. You have the full support of your fanbase here.

New to the story and it was very good, awaiting next installment 5/5 all round.

Some of the best things in life are free: Including this story.

Enjoying the story. Imaginative and well written. Looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for what you do, ltpc!

Best story

Sad that I made it to the end of the currently avalable but am happy that it is still going hope to see more and thank you.

Your link worked for me. There is an unnecessary space has been inserted between the link. Viewing on website version in mobile brower.

"C hriss" = "Chriss"

And that's a nice design. I was struggling to visualise this home. It's good to have a reference for that.

Added to the ranks of Tefler, Conanthe, and Geller! You are rocking it!

I'm seachles and spell bound

Well written, great storry!

Can't say enough praise,!

But Hurry! Pease

You should probably check what your phone keyboard is typing, @HappyPrick

I've written over 50k words for chapter 11 now and am trying to get it edited and completed. Unfortunately, I have a real job when I'm not writing online smut. This is the busiest time of year for me, nothing to do with the holidays. My work is seasonal and I have a short window to make the most of the year, and enough money to see me through. Though I wish it otherwise, I simply have very little time or energy to devote to writing at the moment. Thanks for your patience. It's coming about as fast as I can manage right now.

All we can say is thank you for the update and we anxiously awaits chapter 11.

TK

Your work is worth waiting for, LTPC. Post Ch11 when it's ready, and not a moment sooner. <3

I've been following this story for a long time and am happy to wait for another amazing chapter rather than have you churn out something you're not proud of.

Love your work! It’s honestly my favorite series on here! Keep up the good work. Please take your time with ch 11, I can’t wait to see it!

LTPC, I agree with the several comments that Endangered has broad appeal based on your clever and original story, sensitive interpersonal interactions, coming of age, humor and more. I am inarticulate to say more. Please don't dismiss the future possibility of broader publication. Write on!

Thanks, that's very nice to hear even if it's not nearly up to those standards. I'm working toward the possibility of broader distribution quietly in the background, but it requires a fair amount of revision and thought. I'm more concerned with finishing the story at the moment, given that my time is so limited. Ultimately, this is a fun hobby for me, and there would have to be some serious changes in my life for that to be otherwise. Thanks again.