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Incredible
You have such a gift with words Logo, it is simply amazing.
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As I've told you, I love this poem. And I still love the "but" at the beginning. Great job.
I felt this,
which is what poetry is all about. Nicely captured, Logo. ~Imp
Love
and all the hurt that goes with it ... great poem!!
~Honey
Perfect
poem until after this line:
How can it be more real than this?
I really loved it, but after, I was unsure if your love was still gone or there with you. A memory?
Work it a bit and it will be great!
~Syn
Lovely.
Great piece about forgiveness. The best part of a fight is always making up afterwards.
so sad & confused...
...just like it always is, in a confrontation like this. No one really 'wins'...both parties just feel bad, and you captured the confusion and heartache very well. I hope the ache has healed since then...
I felt this one
You hit the nail on the head with this one, Logo. Thank you for sharing. :)
Love isn't smooth sailing
The sense of confusion, of love and need and fear, was shown perfectly by your words. Wonderful.
Wow
Each phraze is more powerful than the last. The pain in this poem is experessed to the fullest extend of the word.
~mlady
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I don't know about the relationship you are discussing, but I do know this poem is more than just words.
ty,bd
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This poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,000 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.
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