All Comments on 'Him and Her Ch. 01'

Please keep writing. You are doing fine. I desire to read more.

good start, I can't wait to see what comes next.

This could become rather sexy fast. Give that handsome Adonis Mr. Armstrong a stripped physique worth ogling -- a sexy hairy chest, abs to die for and a cock to please Mrs. Williams!

Cannot wait for them to fall in love!

Astrid is easily one of the most annoying character’s I’ve ever read about. It’s like you gave her no back bone and no self-esteem/self-worth. Her husband cheated on her four times, but she thinks a baby will bring them closer. I really hope you don’t make her dependent on this Thor-like dude because it’s really just pathetic and female characters shouldn’t be written like this.

Getting his wife pregnant without her permission is an absolutely disgusting thing to do. He should have just divorced her and found someone else. He clearly would have had a problem doing so if he’s that good looking.

All that aside, I’m looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

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