Adultery is about betrayel, not about sex. Cybersex is cheating, IF you hide it from your partner. Whereas heterosexual sex is not, IF you're doing it with the full knowledge of your partner.
Marriage isn't about monogomy. It is about trust.
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Anonymous04/17/05
To AP
Actually, my comment about homo v/s hetero infidelity was about this part of the story :
"This time there isn't anyone forcing me" Emily said. "Nobody is making me do it, and you will be there every second. I seem to remember you telling me you didn't think there was anything wrong with it, that it wan't even cheating as far as you were concerned."
Me and my big mouth, and Emily with her photographic memory. We had been watching a movie a few weeks ago where a married woman having a fling with another woman, and I had said that I didn't really consider that wrong, certainly not like if it were with a man.
First of all, thank you both for reading the story and taking the time to comment on it inan intelligent manner. I think there are many ways of looking at the situation, and that was what I tried to convey in the story. You know the typical male way of looking at this, which David shared at least in part.
We all have to make our own minds on how to live our lives, and David is no different. The main points are; David and Emily are not married or even engaged, everything that went on was with both parties consent despite the deception involved, and the fact is that David would not have had intercourse with Kyle regardless. Therefore, there were limits to how far the playing went on.
Was it adultery? Obviously not. Was it cheating? I choose to let the individual reader decide, as it's more fun that way.
And while there are those who will banter about with labels attempting to get these characters into them I decided that this story was, for me, more about people sharing their love and affection. Each of them was and is blessed by the others.
isn't the end of the series. I enjoyed these tales and want to read more about Emily and David's adventures. Again, a good story.
by
Anonymous04/18/05
I second that emotion
Emily is fantastic and my wife an I adore her antics. Great warmup material for us, and we've printed all four stories out so we can keep them around the house! Thank you.
by
Anonymous04/20/05
Disappointing
Although all of the other commenters seem to feel differently, I don't like the way this series is heading. Emily is being revealed as manipulative and duplicitous and seems to be taking advantage of David's accepting nature. I'm getting not to like her as much as I did.
I loved the first several chapters of this romance. But I have to agree with the last reader, that this story line is coming apart. I find it hard to believe that a woman that has suppressed her sexuallity for as many years a she has, would become so slutty at light speed. I also am curious as to her setting up a three some after being forced to by her ex-boyfreind? This just does not seem to run true to character. As a stand alone story this story reads fine. It just does't seem to fit the rest of the series. I will look forward to seeing where you are leading us with this series.
by
Anonymous04/21/05
I think it's great
Emily and David have a wonderful relationship, and I think that Emily loves to tease David as much as he likes to be teased. If anybody should have felt used, it would have been David, and he didn't seem to feel that way.
David - I understand the questions about Emily - but I certainly would like more stories with Emily - let me know when you publish more.
I chuckled about the vomitorium - excellent term!
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Anonymous06/13/13
This was a great story about a woman emotionally abused by one "man" but has the courage to begin again albeit slowly to learn to love a again.
English
very unique
How often does a woman get another woman for her man to have fun with all three of them in bed.
Kyle
so Kyle is not a lesbian, just a Bi who swore off men because she was abused.
i wonder if emily really wants a triad?
Hmmm....
so.. cheating isn't cheating if it is homosexual??
Adultery: a definition
Adultery is about betrayel, not about sex. Cybersex is cheating, IF you hide it from your partner. Whereas heterosexual sex is not, IF you're doing it with the full knowledge of your partner.
Marriage isn't about monogomy. It is about trust.
To AP
Actually, my comment about homo v/s hetero infidelity was about this part of the story :
"This time there isn't anyone forcing me" Emily said. "Nobody is making me do it, and you will be there every second. I seem to remember you telling me you didn't think there was anything wrong with it, that it wan't even cheating as far as you were concerned."
Me and my big mouth, and Emily with her photographic memory. We had been watching a movie a few weeks ago where a married woman having a fling with another woman, and I had said that I didn't really consider that wrong, certainly not like if it were with a man.
to AP and anon
First of all, thank you both for reading the story and taking the time to comment on it inan intelligent manner. I think there are many ways of looking at the situation, and that was what I tried to convey in the story. You know the typical male way of looking at this, which David shared at least in part.
We all have to make our own minds on how to live our lives, and David is no different. The main points are; David and Emily are not married or even engaged, everything that went on was with both parties consent despite the deception involved, and the fact is that David would not have had intercourse with Kyle regardless. Therefore, there were limits to how far the playing went on.
Was it adultery? Obviously not. Was it cheating? I choose to let the individual reader decide, as it's more fun that way.
Labels, we have labels
And while there are those who will banter about with labels attempting to get these characters into them I decided that this story was, for me, more about people sharing their love and affection. Each of them was and is blessed by the others.
I hope this
isn't the end of the series. I enjoyed these tales and want to read more about Emily and David's adventures. Again, a good story.
I second that emotion
Emily is fantastic and my wife an I adore her antics. Great warmup material for us, and we've printed all four stories out so we can keep them around the house! Thank you.
Disappointing
Although all of the other commenters seem to feel differently, I don't like the way this series is heading. Emily is being revealed as manipulative and duplicitous and seems to be taking advantage of David's accepting nature. I'm getting not to like her as much as I did.
Questioning Emily's motives?????
I loved the first several chapters of this romance. But I have to agree with the last reader, that this story line is coming apart. I find it hard to believe that a woman that has suppressed her sexuallity for as many years a she has, would become so slutty at light speed. I also am curious as to her setting up a three some after being forced to by her ex-boyfreind? This just does not seem to run true to character. As a stand alone story this story reads fine. It just does't seem to fit the rest of the series. I will look forward to seeing where you are leading us with this series.
I think it's great
Emily and David have a wonderful relationship, and I think that Emily loves to tease David as much as he likes to be teased. If anybody should have felt used, it would have been David, and he didn't seem to feel that way.
Please continue the series
David - I understand the questions about Emily - but I certainly would like more stories with Emily - let me know when you publish more.
I chuckled about the vomitorium - excellent term!
This was a great story about a woman emotionally abused by one "man" but has the courage to begin again albeit slowly to learn to love a again.
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