Daddy Wouldn't Dare

rape of the teasing daughter by daddy

shouldn't this be in the non-consentual/rape category? it was rape.....

Hot as Hell

I've read many incest stories that were boring, and this has to be one of the hottest I believe I've ever seen. The anticipation of what could or couldn't happen was overwhelming the entire time I read this. Long enough to keep you reading, but not so long that it became tedious. I personally wish it would have gone in a different direction than forced sex (not quite same as rape, folks), but the end result was consent. Very hot, very, very hot.

Wow! Wow! Wow!

One of the hottest stories I have ever read.

amazing :)

that was such a good story. it was probably one of the best i've ever read. :)

Very hot indeed

This was truly a hot story. Not a theme I normally like, but this was really well done too!

I'll never understand why some commenters get so hung up on what catagory a story is posted in. Who gives a damn, as long as the story is this good?

Yummy

Your story was absolutely delicious and intoxicating. mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ...the only thing that I didnt like was that she had too much dialogue to herself "what if"....too long winded..

But the interaction parts together was sublime..thank you very much. Keep up the great work!

From a fellow writer: _Lady1SensuaL1Fire_

Faboo!!

This is an awesome story! Not only well written, but very hot too - combining the incest with the exhibitionism and rape - marvelous. Excellent work, keep it up :)

Very Nice

This story was probably one of the best incest stories I have read from this site. There was a bit too much... talking-to-self in the story. I was wondering to myself,"Is this erotic or not? And if so, where's the real stuff?!" I'm not too fond on rape turning to sex. Doesn't really keep me turned on. I would prefer someone to write a story about rape, with the girl not changing into a sex-crazed woman. Good story overall!

I can only echo others

A very good read with a varied and good selection of words.
I loved the build-up to the very hot sex.

I’ve no doubt that I will read more from you.

My best wishes to you Sabledrake

Really hot and so what?

Great story! Never mind the negatives. If you had put it in the non-con cat, you'd have people complaining that it shouldn't be there because of the incest. It seemed like she wanted it anyway so it wasn't all that non-con, at least how I read it. Hot, hot, hot. I will read more of your stories.

Can't please illiterate people

Great story, hot with lots of dimention to the story. Anonymous in Kalifornia is obviously a bone head and a coward. Don't worry about that, just keep writing. Your writing is entrancing!

Excellent story

The best erotic story I've ever read! The build up was incredible and the ending definately delivered. Hopefully we'll see more from you soon.

Fantastic

Fantastic!!! Finally, we get a story where it is "forced" until the VERY end when the person realizes that they actually want it. Holy shit, good stuff. Normally, it's only "forced" for the first part, then you find out they wanted it all along, which gets lame to read for the millionth time. FANTASTIC job, Sabledrake. I hope to read alot more like this in the future. Amazing job!

Don't listen to others -

Loved the strong build-up to the sex. I think we all "talk" ourselves into things over time and it made the ending all the more believable. Great story. My main criticism of most stories is the quick change from a person being normal to completely hedonistic.

Careful what you ask for

And she asked for it alright! She wanted it all along, she just didn't want to be responsible for the actual act, but that's what parents are for, taking responsibility! This was HOT! I loved the way you worked up to it, the way you got her thinking and obsessing about it, and then the way you had Daddy take her like that, "against her will"! Ya right! This was HOTTTTTT!

Oh yes he would

Awesome,brilliant etc,loved the way she didn't realise she was getting to the point of wanting him just as much as he wanted her.Hope you go on to write much more of same quality

I loved it all!

I love the incest stories and this is the best one I have ever read on Literotica. The forced sex just made it even more hot. You knew she wanted it all along and was denying it to herself. I don't consider it rape at all. And I am a woman.Keep up the excellent writting.

super story,

I couldn't put it down (it was up) till I came twice.

The Rest Of The Story*

At first I was sure that no one could be as blatantly obvious as Toni and not have a clue. Then, I remembered what it's like to be 19. Your'e always thinking about sex, and you think that you are getting over on everyone when the truth is you aren't fooling a soul. This story helps me to appreciate all of the things that Dads have to go through and usually, no one ever realizes the great acts he performs. Even when it's just taking no action. It's amazing that this kind of thing doesn't happen much more often than it does.

* I apologize to Mr Paul Harvey, (God bless him in his current home), for using his famous line as my title. My original title was:
Be Thankful, Dads Greatest Gifts Often Go Unnoticed

I was over the maximum letter limit by 1 letter.
Good day.

Daddy WOULD Dare !

Great Story! Very strong and sexy build up and an even sexier solution, love how she gets it all in the end, especially when he makes the little slut beg for it!

wow

LOVEd it! you have obvious talent and need to write more. i love the suspense!

Without a doubt one of the best stories on here

This is a favourite of mine. If I'm in need of an orgasm, and browsing through stories I haven't read keeps leading me to crap, I return to old favourites like this. Figured I should finally take the time to write and tell you how good it is. Incredibly hot and well-written. Kudos.

more with anal!

Title says it all. Great work! Every aspect great.

Oh... my... god... Amazing

I found this story through a friend favorite list... And now it's going on mine too. I hope you write more stories like this because it was just...

I started reading this with family in this house, thinking I could get away with a litter erotica and get myself off later... but no! I brought myself off right out in the open and will probably have to go take a long hot shower before I'm presentable for anyone.

Thank you.

Damn good story

I loved every bit of this story! It was great!

Great Story!

This should definitely have a sequel to see if she dares again. Would be great if she were also ass fucked!

Vindication

Thank you! Thank you! This is real life, I could really feel his emotions being a daddy myself. Although I never fucked either of my step daughters, I did have a few intimate moments brought on by their teasing, perhaps I should have been more adventurous?

Fantastic!

One of the best I've read! LOVED the suspense, build-up, and the way she finally realized she wanted it too...

My only complaint is that I want someone who'll play Daddy to me!

OMG

That deffinately hasto be one of the best ive read on this site....cant fault it at all any more parts????

Hot

Gawd... This story was great.. Well written. Keep writing...

good story

Good story, but I think you took too long to get there.

I've made myself...

Late for work just to finish reading this! Thank you for the morning cum! lol

Love the story, suspense, build up and MMMMM the sex was hot. The little bitch DID want it, but I loved all the No Daddy's! TOO HOT! I agree, you should build on to this story, after all... MOM is gone for a whole week, this was just the first morning after! KEEP EM CUMMING!!

Amazing!

This story is amazing - everything Ive been looking for. Thank you thank you thank you!

talk about a perfect slow build up, wow!

Love this story. It really drags you in and makes you need to read it.

Perfect

By far the hottest story I've read on the site. Your talent is amazing; keep up the good work.

So HOT!!

Really well written, one of my favourite storys ive read so far! thankyou for an amazing orgasm! keep writing!

So hot!!

I forced my dad to fuck me after reading this.

Awesome!

Fucking great story!!! So hot and well done. I loved it and came twice! Haha...

Keep 'em coming!

Weird but good

I'm fourteen and I dont like my dad but I would tease my first crush who is just about the way you described the dad, and I would ask first, cause he had a fucking erection over me when I was young and he's been driving me mad for 5 years its about time I lived those fucking dreams, who cares if Im a virgin!

Mmmmm!

Just yum!

Wow!!!

Amazing writing. Kept my attention the entire time. I want more!

Wow

Powerful stuff. Well written. Your quite a talent. Write more

Yes!

This was so good. This makes me want to get off but I can't because my roommate is in the room. Love this.

thats hot

made me think about the first time with my daughter she was 14

Excellent

Good erotica....give us more and more and more

That's right !.....

......a good hard lesson that should be learned by teasing little vixens around the world!

god wish I was a tease to get this kind of treatment. Its hot.

So well written and sexy

This is an excellent story. Some people want wham bam thank you mam tales, not me. The way that this builds up, she teasing her daddy, Sabledrake teasing her readers, is quite delicious. Of course it's true that females have power over we men, and many know just how to wield it. If Toni were my daughter she could sit on my face at breakfast!
Well done. I've found another favourite author.

This is THE BEST incest story I have read on this site. I have been reading these type of stories for years and I have to admit this one had me wanting to reread it right after I finished.. Incredible. Wow.

Great stuff

this story was well written from the start. I started reading it and did not want to stop. I am glad that she got what she deserved. Too bad she didn't get impregnated as well. That would have been amusing.