All Comments on 'Luna vs. The Camp Ch. 01'

She seems to be getting along with these new girls.

Really liking the new direction of this story. I like the almost reboot of her being sent to a new place (although it would be fun to see a visit to her home town after the coin toss part of the last story line) Much nicer with her new friends doing this stuff to her/ making her do it out of fun other than meaness as it was with her rival. I like the video element and the quote about it being seen online.

Over all, good choices

She's naked outside the cabin already then she gets inside and she's wearing clothes again?

oh damn, I didn't realize that I did that, it tends to happen when you stop writing one day and continue the next, the problem is that I can't even change this since Literotica doesn't allow me to edit them or even remove the story entirely and repost it.

Just pretend that she was already naked when she went in, and they just start with Kylie asking her about being filmed.

Great story.. Great writing. Even tho I'm a guy, i felt like i was luna!