All Comments on 'Wife Now in Control Ch. 01'

One part of the selfish ass b i t c h is enough. If there is a part 2 let the husband dump her f****** ass and let her be in total control of the damn dog LOL

Please! Part 2! To read how a woman who for years was under the thumb of her husband then turned it around where he is now controlled is fabulous. Please continue as we would love to read how it goes. Disregard the previous comment. There's a person who needs to feel the dominance of a fine woman, to put him or her under your lovely behind too.

Please continue with part 2. This is the start of a very interesting story or tale. It appears that there will be some story police but just ignore them and do your thing. Thanks.

I would love to read more!

Definitely want Part 2!!

If that was part one, don't post part two! Complete rubbish and a waste of time reading.

You’re build up to Ch.02 is a little cumbersome. It’s the repetitive nature Iof keeping refering to the next chapter. You keep saying “this will be explained in chapter 2. Leave it to the reader’s imagination of what’s going to come next. It’s boring telling us “this is going to happen and you you will enjoy it.”

But we don’t want to wait. We want it now. From what we know Ch.02 is going to be a good chapter. I think if you have the next chapter written then 1 & 2 should have been written as one chapter. Even now you could join them together and submit as an edit.

But the way this is written I think a lot of readers won’t stick around tip enjoy it. Give the story some life.

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Can’t wait for chapter 2

So at a minimum of you being 58, you two change roles?

Part 2 is ready. It's still in pending. Please urge Literotica to release part 2.

Thanks BJMSTORIES

Maybe you should get your husband to proof read and correct your spelling mistakes as well as grammatical errors. It's rather annoying.

I am a pathetic sissy male who knows it's place is to serve any womans sexual needs in any manner she desires. If she craves constant oral gratification so be it. If she needs to have a toilet so be it. If she wishes to mark me or remove my useless male equipment so be it. Parade me naked and sexless so be it. Yes Please use me for your gratification

Because I am on the way becoming a 24/7 slave to my wife too

“Interesting” is a lukewarm comment commonly used when one cannot award more complementary praise. I assume the writer is not a native English speaker, because word usage and sentence construction is often awkward. So if English is not the writer’s native tongue, she/he is to be commended for having the courage to write for us. I suggest finding an English speaker to proofread. And I look forward to chapter 2.

OTT. Needs to be spell checked & grammar corrected before uploading

I love your take on things and am really looking forward to part 2! Hope it arrives soon!