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Phantom Surrender

byWanton Vixxxen©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/29/05

Very steamy!

Some clever word play and wonderful images, WV! Leaves me panting for more!

Fly

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by Anonymous03/29/05

Wow!

I've been looking for this level of heat all morning. Steamy, seductive and well written. Thanks!

~Syn

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by dcpoet4403/29/05

my glasses are steamed.......

and i wonder why......*LOL*......absolutely a terrific write.

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by My Erotic Tale03/29/05

I surrender

wow a witty word wizard poem~
bows humble (~_~) excellent erotic poetry

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by 03/30/05

Mmmooore

Highly erotic. I'd bow down and kiss your toes right here, but all I would be tasting is my keyboard and it would ruin the fantasy ;)

Thank you, Vix.

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by Bridget6903/30/05

Very hot...

and seductive.

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by Anonymous03/31/05

steamy

wow, nice imagery...very hot.

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by 04/01/05

Grinning mischeviously...

Well, if I didn't know better....*wink*

This was fabulous baby, and not too many would understand the "Zorro", so you...have touched on a multitude of inside thoughts that mean a lot to Your Man of Sand.

So beautiful, so expressive, so damn fucking erotic!

Your MOS aka SMF

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by 04/05/05

I am in awe...

In awe of your prose, the fluidity of which you write. The images, and metaphors are so genuine, and alive. This work of art is a painting you drew with words. Thank you for sharing your intimate soul. ~ :) Rain

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by LeBroz07/17/05

Fiery

Of passion etched in black and white
Exploding in fiery cleansing color
I need a cigarette
and I don't smoke

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by PatHous5604/03/06

Hot Wake-up Call.

This promises to be a long day, so I read this to send me off. Now I'm tempted to call in sick! Patricia

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