All Comments on 'Ray Ch. 05: Abyss'

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Emirus over 5 years ago

Well worth the wait

Your attention to detail is marvellous although I’ve never come across music, throbbing or otherwise, in bowling alleys in England. Worth far more than 5⭐️

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Thank you

Aleways a pleasure

UrSquireG over 5 years ago

Oh My God...or have I already said that?

Things are coming together. People are coming together. I am getting it more and more. And...all i want...is...more, please...

themaninthehighcastle over 5 years ago

Back to the good stuff.

Ur writing keeps improving. I'm hooked.

I hope Ray and Nat can find happiness.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

I love where you're taking this

I check almost daily, waiting for you to post another chapter.

Please don't stop.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

This is an amzing read

Just had to stop and say i lovvve your writing

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