All Comments on 'The Taste of You'

to put a grin on an accountant! Loved it, Honey!

Fly

These last two poems left me weak with my own fantasies! This little erotic story, told in only the barest of words, cut right to the chase, and any man who doesn't appreciate that is legally dead! You're the sexiest thing on the planet, honey...

Wonderful picture and a great write. Makes me wanna.

~Syn

Sexy, Honey! ~Minx

You hit the nail on the head, babe. Wonderfully erotic. eric

speechless, great poem

Love it! This was a difficult one to figure out which stanza I liked most.

<goes back>

Deeper, nose pressed against you,

I taste you as your cum

slides down my throat

I drink you in. <<<< YES!!

Suddenly, I really need a drink. LOL!

...and I need a cold shower. Not the "not-hot" kind, but the "water heater is broke" kind. Damn, H123, and I was trying to get ready to go to work. Now I am totally distracted!

Which means ya dun' good girl...

Wowza gurl.

What a hot lil ride you have here.

I love the *in your face* imagery.

The flow is satiny smooth.

Wonderfull wording.

Gotta love this hot lil poem~!!!

Now I wish I had a dick. All the best - Willow

Not always easy to "pull", yet this "came off" well!

The words flowed as smooth as the action you described so well.

You've drained me!

Sucked me in and turned me on...

YOWZAH!

awesome! loved it

I'm enjoying your poems Honey, again, this one i liked, very erotic, slightly raw.

...of your poetry...it's really exhilirating.....I love it. I hope hubby appreciates his good woman here. He's got better than many. You're extremely passionate and it shows.

Thank you Honey. Closed my eyes and I was there. ;)

Makes so want a nice hot drink;)

Wonderful rendition of getting sucked off, very real. Would love to return the favor five-fold if it would entertain you sometime. benawriter@gmail.com

A poem about sucking cock, written by a lady... what could be better ?

of the fellatio handbook, TK U MLJ LV NV