Started out great, kept going, and then we get to here:
Today is the day," he said to himself as he penetrated her. She had said that it would be okay but he wasn't sure until that moment when he saw her face.
I really do think that this deserves a whole lot more explanation, if you want this story to move from slightly above average to great.
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Anonymous04/08/05
incredibly hot story
This is by far one of the best erotic stories I have ever read!!! Its amazing when you find a story on here where the love and caring between two people comes through so well. while also being an incredibly hot story.
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Started out great, kept going, and then we get to here:
Today is the day," he said to himself as he penetrated her. She had said that it would be okay but he wasn't sure until that moment when he saw her face.
I really do think that this deserves a whole lot more explanation, if you want this story to move from slightly above average to great.
incredibly hot story
This is by far one of the best erotic stories I have ever read!!! Its amazing when you find a story on here where the love and caring between two people comes through so well. while also being an incredibly hot story.
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