All Comments on 'Domestic Wife Ch. 09'

Omg- SO GOOD!! SO WORTH THE WAIT!

I cried my eyes out on this one because I can relate to those feelings in Darcys mind. Thank you so much for writing all of these chapters they are a wonderful work of erotic literature

You have captured Darci's feelings of unworthyness as only someone who knows them could. Her thoughts echo the ones I have struggled with my entire life. You have captured the pain so accurately that it felt like my story. Thankfully you have provided Darcy with someone who sees her as worth loving and willing to try anyway possible to show her. Jesse is a gentle, caring person who truly wants his wife to find the happiness she deserves. The fact that he stays with her and continues to seek ways to prove her worth makes him a hero. Depression and mental health take a strong support system and Jesse seems very capable of helping Darci.

I see you are a new writer on this site and both your stories are excellent! I eagerly look forward to more stories from you. You are an excellent writer. I hope that writing this story helped you.

I agree with your comment, I can only speak from a female perspective because I’m a woman. I’ve never once met a woman who was completely happy with how she looks. The everyday pressure in life contributes and compounds a sense of low self worth. Personally I believe that this low self esteem is even worse with submissive women.

My husband often complains that I don’t spend money on myself, he’s right I find it incredibly difficult to spend money on me. It makes me feel guilty because there’s so much other stuff I could do with the money. So yeah bravo pinkcandy99, you hit the nail on the head.

Tess (UK)

I am in love with this story and hope that you are writing more of Jesse and Darcy's life story. You have, in my mind, written a very accurate portrait of a young woman who has never been told she is worth something. I would love to see Darcy bloom into the amazing person you have set her up to be. Thank you for a well written and thought provoking story with just enough sexuality to keep things "interesting!"

Please continue to add more!

I really appreciate that Jesse learns that her negative thoughts aren’t about him and that he is able to step away from feeling personally attacked by her depression. That is hard for some people who don’t understand how depression works. Jesse is really trying to help her. And I appreciate how honestly and accurately you wrote Darcy’s thoughts and feelings.

However, I want to mention a few things that won’t have the consequences that he wants and very possibly will make things worse. Jesse tells her to not talk about her negative thoughts and that he doesn’t want to hear them. That is terrible. Never say that to a depressed person. Getting angry at those thoughts teaches Darcy to hide them and push them down, but doesn’t make them go away. They will fester and grow and get worse. Putting negative thoughts (especially false ones!) allows for sunlight and truth to help dispel them. Once the thought is out in the open, Jesse should help her come up with reasons why it isn’t true. Then have her do something and think about his examples until she believes the positive over the negative.

It sounds like with the rules he is trying to do that, however, every time she has a negative thought she is either breaking rule one or rule two. “Tell me when you have negative thoughts” and “don’t say negative things about yourself”. You can’t do both of those things. Getting punished every time she has a negative thought will reinforce the negative loop that she isn’t good enough.

I really hope you decide to continue

It's a beautiful, loving and sensual story. I love how he adores her. The only thing that put me off were there errors in the writing - things such as "laid" instead of "lay" and "her's" instead of "hers". Sorry but these things are off putting. Apart from that, it was wonderful.

you know what when i started reading i thought it would be superb but your characters especially jesse is a complete douchebag you know why okay lets see

a women like darcy innocent sweet gentle submissive is a dream come true for any man be it a regular guy or a dom she is perfect she doesnt need any kind of training ,conditioning ,chastity belt,doggy type eating humiliation,no lube anal why do these things to someone as naturally submissive as darcy

and everything is wrong with jesse you claim your story is about jesse working on self improvement is a farce that asshole doesnt even recognises that he himself has pushed her to doubt and hate herself he never behaves like a husband he behaves only like a master fucking all the time after claiming her

everytime he makes her come it would be either clit simulation or just touching its never normal fucking like other humans do it would be always like a dom asking sub to come w/o any actual intercouse at all

everytime he comes inside her it would be only rough and aggressive never gentle romantic normal lovemaking he would just thrust in her roughly w/o any foreplay and would come before letting her come always denying her

then he starved her and made her eat like a dog came on her face to humiliate her insult her

he fucked her ass with zero anal play and no lube at all and see his hypocrisy he says i dont want to give you pain yeah as if asshole

he scold her for her backtalk to that bastard bookshop owner although she was sorry after and told him she had no knowledge that she is insulting jesse

but nowhere in your story jesse ever felt accountable or guilty for all his unnecessary punishment his sadistic kinks to her

instead he makes readers believe that it was all due to het fault and incompetence that he was forced to punish her as if she needed all those

and now while the doublestandard douchebag bastard jesse is thinking that punishment and humiliation are not enough(oh yeah it was not enough for jesse the asshole)

he is writing some stupid rewards and consequences

but wait for it

he will still use chastity belt for punishment wait what i thought jesse was done with punushment and poor sweet darcy had already told him she doesnt very much like chastity belt he will still use it

these are all the things that made her doubt and hate herself at the first place

so tell me how had jesse improved at all or how darcy will see her selfworth when he doesnt even acknowlege his part in darcys grief at all ?

so hence proved its only jesse with whom lies all problems ,nothing nothing is wrong with poor darcy

again everything us wrong with jesse and jesse only

so please kindly see the flaw in your characters and the mindfucking caused by jesse on darcy

there that was the most honest review i could give i love all other aspect of story how jesse was patient with her till her virginity ,how he was slowly training her mind and attitude ,how patiently he tries to teach her

i am sorry if i offended you i really am looking to read more of your work

the ending was rushed

I loved this story so much. It was so sensual and was tugging at my heart strings. You should really publish this. You might have to edit some parts and fix a few parts but overall it was amazing. Forget the ppl who have something negative to say. This was your story and how you wanted it to go. If they don’t like it they can lick ass.

Great chapter. Darcy’s struggles are a common reality and you’ve presented them painfully accurately. I strongly believe that low self esteem is very common amongst women, even more so in the sexually submissive.

Her character background has her as a child from a large family handed off in marriage to a stranger. That alone would promote feelings of being invisible/ overlooked. His treatment of her has been extreme focused on Master : Slave, or Dom : Sub with little to no evidence of the husband : wife relationship. So to me her negative outlook is a combination of both things.

It’s incredibly difficult to try and transplant a modern D/s relationship into a historical setting so it does call for a dose of *suspension of disbelief*. As readers we don’t have access to the the rest of these character’s lives only what we are shown in each chapter. So in your minds eye they might have plenty of loving *vanilla* sex but it isn’t obvious to the reader. Last chapter I commented on contraception which I inferred from a leap of logic - or at least it was logical to me.

I must admit I’m more than a little envious of your writing talent! Love your writing style.

Many thanks for sharing. Tess (uk)

Anonymous from over 2 years ago. You forgot that when she had the chastity belt on, he used her mouth and throat so hard that she was in tears and unable to breathe as he held her head down with his hands, making her cough and gag when he came, Everytime!! Even when she didn't have it on as well. Made her stay in stress positions with her knees aching on the table while he ate dinner then fucked her like a whore. Made her do her chores such as cleaning the floor on her knees naked apart from the chastity belt, shaved her pubic hair off and all this because she touched her clit but didn't come. He was the one who fucked up her mental health with emotional, mental and physical abuse such as slapping her buttocks and her breasts!! He is a Domestic Abuser!! And how old is he because of the level of education and knowledge? I wonder when she was a child and found the bookshop and saw the sailor with the charts, was that him? Because it's not mentioned what work he does to afford nice things and books!! Oh and he makes her keep her eyes open during orgasm, which is difficult for a woman to do because women feel while men are visual, don't see them shutting their eyes during a BJ!!!