All Comments on 'Blank Betty'

by evelyn_carroll

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Damn good poem

thanks for sharing. Great write!

~Syn

TathagataTathagataabout 19 years ago
very interesting

style and presentation.

I liked it alot.

Thank you

ishtatishtatabout 19 years ago
#

You have made a character with a lot of 'oomph who drives this forward well. One sp error.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
bam a lam

oh betty is a girl friday,

hell I lost mine <grin>

been banking on miss tuesday <smile>

on a serious note the realism was real

and the humor was funny ~~

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Wham bam...

thank you mam, for this delightful read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
damn

evelyn_carroll

that is a name I will remember and look for.

thank you for something new with which to end my day.

hopes for more,

annaswirls etc

ThatRetroHorrorThatRetroHorrorover 14 years ago
Much Better...

After reading that last bit you wrote, I decided that I'd look through here and see what else you had to offer--see if it might've been the fact that it was 'older' work or sommot.

I must say that your poetry is astounding.

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
DOES BLANK BETTY

have instincts for others or whom. TK U MLJ LV NV

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