All Comments on 'Best Friend's MILF'

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I like when Rachel calls Robert "Daddy".

An editor for word usage would improve the story.

I love when an older woman calls a younger guy daddy. It just makes it that much hotter.

...your writing was better! This could have been a decent read. As it, it's just annoying.

agreed on her calling him daddy, I got really excited when i read that

just work on your typos and you're golden

I Really Great story!!!! Loved your writing and of course love enormous boobs!!!! Please write more!!!! Thanks.

An editor would really make for a good read. Thanks for sharing.

The aroma was as intoxicating as her body". Writing like this more or less sums up the quality of this piece.

Biggest tits, longest biggest cock, and unlimited energy is to hard tolive with in this story. I know... fiction.

In the 4th paragraph of the story you write:

I found it hard to take my mind of his mother. Oliver always longed for the girls as his house when there was a perfectly stacked MILF in his own house.

I believe that should be "take my mind OFF his mother." And the second sentence apparently has a word or two missing as not make sense.

I was hesitant to read further if this was going to be typical of your "style" but glad I did - enjoyable story but unfortunately what I mention above is just one of many examples of a story that needs better proof reading.

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The characters are aged 18 or older but Robert has to ask his mother if he can stay over?

Get an editor. Needs a lot of help.