My Sister's Pajama

wish i was him

wish i had the nerve to do that with my sisiter panties keep it comming

Benifit of doubt

Apparently English is not your first language

Getting there

It was running quite well, but then it ended. Could you please make your stories a little longer?

Don't

Don't post a story until it's ready to be posted. This was not fair to the reader.

learn

learn to spell and write in english or post your stories in your native language i couldn't finish i got a headache trying to fill in the missing words and figure out what you were trying to say go back to school preferably an english speaking school and take some writing and english classes

first draft

this would make a good first draft but should never have been posted it needs some seriuos work and a good editor do a rewrite and never ever post a story without going through a good editor first it isn't fair to the readers

good start

This is a good start. I appreciate the protagonist's ambivalence about being aroused by his sister.

greeeeeat, please more

oy

This hasn't approached incest yet. At best, you're flirting with fetish.

Arghh! Waay too short! Man, I wish you had held off posting till it was longer! Now I have to go look at your page and hope this wasnt written years ago with no follow-up chapters, lol ;)

Story of my life