This seems so personal that to comment is almost an intrusion, so I'll 5 it and wimp off.
The perfect line: "I love your big Mick Jagger lip"
The rest made me cry. Maybe it's pms. Maybe I'm a sap. Most likely because this was so real.
kingdoms fall...because nothing can compare to the love of a beautiful woman.
Truly one of the best things you've ever written.
it's honest, tender, and exposes your vulnerability which is sexy as hell.
This Terence, he is a lucky man, no??
I just love the way you write
so very much like wonder woman~
I meant a woman wondering
bows humble to a poetic grasshopper
how does this man named Terence with a big Mick Jagger lip handle all your love? I have to tell you, this poem speaks devotion to the nth degree. Simply unheard of...
A great expression of unconditional love.
.............smile. Thanks, Ange - and Terence.
Beautiful work, angeline!
Here's a big marshmallow peep for both of you!
(Glad that sty cleared up, Terry!)
Didn't want to intervene in the love between you and your guy in PF&D. This is delightful.
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