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The Non-Making of a Mama

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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve04/04/05

This may sound crazy, but...

you read that the way I've heard grandpa's read the Night Before Christmas. lol Of course, Santa wasn't a biker... I honestly don't enjoy this particular kind of poetry but I can tell you enjoyed creating your poem and reading it. And I know this will entertain many literotica readers. So, keep doing your thing!

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by Syndra Lynn04/05/05

Poetic

prose. You are the king. I enjoyed this a great deal. Very in the spirit of my favorite site. Good write!

~Syn

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by My Erotic Tail04/05/05

laugfhing

so the woman at LIT were turned down by bikers, damn now you tell me, I know just kiddin', funny though, and kinda clever, I almost thought it was gonna be a joke told but it truely does fit in the poems catagory The way it all wove to a cute ending, nice poem.

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by Bridget6904/06/05

One would think...

A woman wouldn't have any trouble picking up men after spending so much time on lit. Then again, maybe those bikers should come here and get a few pointers on how to be seduced. LOL!

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by LeBroz01/07/07

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There you go sweetums, run to you salvation in reading the stories on Lit!

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by Anonymous05/20/09

Cute

This was a really cute poem. Was it true?

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