All Comments on 'Evidence of Spring'

spring poems.

Some nice observations made and presented simply they weave a much bigger picture.

I also liked the rhyme scheme quite a bit.

It made the read upbeat and gave it a " busy spring" feel.

My only complaint..the use of "gray" twice.

Cheat like the rest of us...bookmark an on line thesaurus and when you're stuck take a quick peek.

Most of the time it brings back words you've forgotten.

: )

This poem beautifully conveys the promise of new beginnings, not only throughout the transition of the seasons, but also in one's life. Very nice.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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