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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata04/03/05

I love

spring poems.
Some nice observations made and presented simply they weave a much bigger picture.

I also liked the rhyme scheme quite a bit.
It made the read upbeat and gave it a " busy spring" feel.

My only complaint..the use of "gray" twice.
Cheat like the rest of us...bookmark an on line thesaurus and when you're stuck take a quick peek.
Most of the time it brings back words you've forgotten.
: )

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by Bridget6904/04/05

Hope springs eternal.

This poem beautifully conveys the promise of new beginnings, not only throughout the transition of the seasons, but also in one's life. Very nice.

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by LeBroz01/19/08

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.



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