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Vivid
Active description makes this interesting, surreal, like walking in a 'daymare'.
I like this
You've a way with words, Luc. Vivid is right.
I have no clue ...
... if I got your drift on this one, but I liked it just the same. At any rate, I created my own imagery to associate with it -- and it fits. Well done. ~Imp
Great work Luke
I always enjoy reading your poetry, looking forward to the other submissions coming soon
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Liken this to a Picasso painting or, as neo described it, a surrealistic daymare; get caught in this and you'll find yourself wanting to just get out.
inevitable conclusion
Through the sea of turmoil at last a safe Harbor is in sight.
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