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Babysitters First Time

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by thekiwicharmer04/14/05

Naughty Naughty

Although she said yes, it was blackmail and yes it was rape. What are you planning next. Her tight ass?

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by Anonymous04/14/05

BIG CUM

Story was goog for shooting a huge messy load all over myself.
keep it up.

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by Anonymous04/14/05

A nice Outline

All the good stuff is there. Lust, some fear, fantasy, rape, but very little shame. Unlike many stories that go just on and on, this one would be better if each of the paragraphs had been fleshed out with more detail.

We are told that she was excited and wet between the legs, but hearing her thoughts and feeling her fear and/or desires would be a very nice touch. Did the warm water on her vulva while she was being shaved excite her?? During the week between the spanking and the rape, did she mull over in her mind weither to go back or except her parent's rath.

Good Stroke Story, but with a little work you could make it a great story.

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by Scorpio4404/14/05

If I was asked to finish this story...

Daddy would get his. Not only would the babysitter set him up to get caught but get caught and lose everything. His behavior deserves that.

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by duke1104/15/05

GREAT!

I love stories like this. Fucking the babysitter stories are the best. ?I am waiting for more.

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by Anonymous04/17/05

Weak

poor tale, little to engage, and little to redeem.

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by Anonymous05/21/05

Yes!

Very well told! More, more!

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by msboy805/21/05

Hmmmmm

I read the comments, so I would like to apologize for issing the part where you said this was a true story. Duh, it's a fantasy and if you don't like nonconsent, why are you reading this!

Sorry, had to vent. You didn't deal with the possible pregnancy angle, are you going to cover it later or just ignore it?

Keep writing. Take care and be well.

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by Anonymous06/07/05

ever good moor please

loved it keep up the good work

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by don8765403/15/06

Great reading!

Daddy needs to also become a daddy with his horny little babysitter as well, in a future addition to this story.

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by Anonymous09/26/06

EMOTIONAL ISSUES

THE STORYLINE WAS GOOD AND IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF THE BABYSITTER'S EMOTIONS WERE BROUGHT INTO IT.

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by KOLKORE09/26/06

No emotional issues need exploring (yet?)

I meant no disrespect to previous poster, but I laughed when I read about the need to explore said babysitter’s emotional issues. This story is such a complete Role playing /make belief set of scenario’s, that if you are into it you can just take it into bed with your meaningful other and simply get into the roles. Nothing is real here. The good news – nothing seems to try to appear to be real. Just fun. Well that’s my take on it, but I guarantee if I notice any sign of turning away from role playing/ fun style I will too try to alert the author not to forget the babysitter’s fillings!

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by Anonymous01/17/07

true life

i was 13 years old and was made to babysit for family and was raped while the baby was sleeping but now since i have been raped so many times in my life i feel like it is a part of me. i like to read about it maybe something was destroyed and reading about others fantasies about it has made me see why they like it.

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by Anonymous05/26/11

Good job

I liked it. hope to read more soon!

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by Anonymous09/28/11

I liked it but the actual sex bit seemed very short. Perhaps a little more detail, other than that you kept me hard through out the hold thing, kudos ;-)

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by Anonymous01/09/13

Fair writer

A bit more reluctance by the babysitter, a more realistic dialogue, would make this more enjoyable.

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by Anonymous03/04/14

molestation

I have had young girls suck my cock many times because they wanted to not because i was a letch and made them - even black mailed them - wrong - young girls will suck cock willingly if you be kind and gentle

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by Anonymous03/13/14

Ghe

This is kinda like a dark story she never should have went back after he spanked her this story is......is just wrong sorry not even 1 star I read it through big mistake sorry it's my own opinion I don't like stories that are based on rape

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by Anonymous12/14/16

going back.

i would love to know if she ever got it onto her head to go back for more? or did she get a fantasy that made her feel she needed more?

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