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evelyn_carrollevelyn_carrollalmost 19 years agoAuthor
Musical notation

It now appears that the Literotica “webification” process has stripped out the spaces between the notes in the above “music”. This means that my Windows Notepad suggestion doesn’t work. You can probably (in Notepad) reconstruct the spacing because there is, mostly, one note per syllable. If all else fails, and you don’t already know this tune, mail me and I’ll send the text file with the spaces.

Oh yeah, and there’s a missing “me” in Line 14. Mea culpa!

Evelyn

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
enoyed this piece....

for it's play on hooker life. nice all the way around. i'll have to get the explanation of the musical behind it. nice work!!......don

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
enchanting

very nice and easy read, not to mention humorous and very well thought out, the addition at the bottom sprinkled some more spice to a delicious poem, thanks (~_*)

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 19 years ago
Instantly

became one of my favorite Lit poets! Thanks for all your work. This one's a hoot!

~Syn

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