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ZMP~ Leaves that don't fall

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by Anonymous

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by dcpoet4404/04/05

i've often wondered this....

myself. it has an against all odds theory to it. if only against all odds wasn't so overused it could be supplanted as the title. so, it makes sense to keep this as it is. simply written with a complexity of why's.....nice work!!.....don

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by Anonymous04/04/05

Where do they go?

are you saying they sail into space?
I liked the different ways the leaves are similar to man/woman kind, Basic and simple.

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by 04/05/05

Looking through the middle eye

This is nice Art.

It reminded me of walks and shooting photos, what goes through your mind as you're doing so.

Sometime take a camera with you on an outing, get real close to nature and look through the viewfinder, snap the photo. It's a new perspective, but will have you seeing everything differently.

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by Bridget6904/05/05

Good.

Nicely conveys the individuality of the leaves, and the different ways in which nature's elements exist and evolve.

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by Anonymous04/05/05

lovely

wonderfully zen

~Syn

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nice...

loved it! :)
Kisses,
T

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by Anonymous04/10/05

Nicely written

Your style never ceases to come out in your works of arts.
Thank you for provoking thoughts from your readers..

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by LeBroz07/18/05

**5**

Such powerful imagery; where were you when I needed this in High School English oh so many decades ago.

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by lindiana07/19/05

Lovely

By far and away, my favorite of your works. Reminds me of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost. Perhaps the imagery. But it is truly divine. Thank you!

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