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Unique
subject for poetry. Well written and it made me think. Stop doing that!
~Syn
Somber...
but alluring in its presentation. A subject for a poem I never would have ventured, but you indeed pulled off very well.
Vixxx
CSI
Well this poem was ...interesting! depth of sadness felt but unsure of the full details? But nice write, thanks.
Unique
I like this. The feeling I get reading this is both routine in work and sadness at the end of the day, walking the same road as the woman she just examined. I work in an emergency room and treat patients all day. Faces are not a blur yet, there is still emotion behind what I do and I believe when there isn't then it's time to quit.
Very good work and as Syndra said, this one makes a reader think.
A dark look...
at the way these casualties end up as nameless statistics who are only routinelely acknowledged then discarded from thought at the end of the day.
choice
such a topic is difficult to come to conclusion... my feelings so mixed, but the presentation is easy to comment on. Word choice and tone build the meaning and feel of this poem. nice work-
annaswirls
To die for!
Very different choice of subject possibly your best to date but maybe "Daisy" is still there.
~~
Here's a good one
from a few months back;
of lives interchangeable
and in death, unchanged ~
insignificant...
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