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A French Rose 'Art of Archery'

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/05/05

Well done!

fun read, creative write. Thanks for this.

~Syn

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by Wanton Vixxxen04/05/05

I wish I lived in the "Days of Old"...

instead of being old in these days .I could visualize the entire scene you painted with your Renaissance inspired verse. Unique {just like it's author}, I absolutely loved it, Art!!!

Vixxx

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by Ninja Nookie04/05/05

Inside scoop

since I have the inside scoop, I am now waiting on the others:) And the Scarlet Rose, my favorite, where is it, thats been months ago, Art? Tapping my toes, waiting!

I love your Rose Poems,
Nin:)

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by Maria239404/06/05

:)

I like your story poems. It takes a creative mind to tell a good story without saying a whole lot. keep up the good work :)

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by 04/06/05

Yes

I agree with Maria about your story poems, Art. Clever pen!

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by dcpoet4404/06/05

laughing....

and i was lead to initially believe it would have lead to greener pastures. but this ended up in the stables.......man......what a way to go......*LOL*. great job!!.......don

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by Anonymous04/06/05

More that a poem...

it is instead a very engaging tale.

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Story Weaver

your poems are artfully told stories! Awesome... the way you weave the stanza's and the words in and out and up and down to get just the perfect effect!
amazed as always at your talent!
Kisses,
T

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by Anonymous04/09/05

Awesome Art

What a great series....

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by LeBroz08/06/05

Now This is a Fun One.............

Well, for all except Flatterbush;
which just goes to show once again
that poetry can be fun

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by duddle14612/17/06

surprise.

Love the renderings when they have references to another time. What a supreme delight; Lady Jena's surprise for Lord Flatterbush. A witty delightful read.

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by tazz31706/14/12

MAKE SURE OF THE WAGER

before the outcome is finished, TK U MLJ LV NV

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