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Very clever.
indeed
clever and well written
~Syn
I hope I can
Very well put
Yes
spirit of the shadow that flows through the earth like a hand through water. Man can't walk thru a tree so he hugs it and shows its form, giggles from the carpet of leaves is only the wind, or think again! Okay I was inspired
Yes
spirit of the shadow that flows through the earth like a hand through water. Man can't walk thru a tree so he hugs it and shows its form, giggles from the carpet of leaves is only the wind, or think again! Okay I was inspired
Nice
work and point taken. I like this:
"I can see the ghost through the window
even on the sunny days."
A whole poem could easily be written to that quote.
very nice.......
and very clever it is.....i love this:
does my poetry submit
or does my pen hold the key to submission?
great work........don
An interesting take...
on interpretations and observations. There's nothing elusive about the imnpressions of this piece.
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