by The_story_writer2003
I liked your story, but I would have loved it if you had gotten yourself an editor. Keep on writing!
Or anywhere. Inserting an open bottle into a woman and fucking her with it can cause a prolapse, it really wouldn’t be sexy to find part of her womb/ colon in the bottle.
So yeah that kinda put me off the story content. Besides it’s not as though any of the guys are going to honour their word, not when the tiny brain is doing their thinking for them.