by Soazoldman
As a man about Jim's age who had the pleasure of having a very passionate relationship with a much younger lover a few years ago, thank you for bringing back some fond memories. I'm pretty sure that I kept her happy during our blissful year together. Now the question is, will Jim and Jacqui grow closer, or will Pam want to get in on the action? More, please....
May need more stories about their future relationship. I find widowers to be generally great lovers...because they fulfilled their wedding vows. Love the Arizona setting of Prescott. 5 Stars.
The mix up of the tenses (it starts in the first para) is disruptive. Get things in order, please.
A very good start towards a loving relationship between these two beautiful people. Age is just a number. I hope you will write more chapters about this couple.
Ignore the ignorant Anonymous trolls, this was a lovely story. It was well told and held my attention all the way through.
I'm enjoying your writing. Keep up the good work.
Five Stars.
I am in a similar position as Jack. A perfect story before visiting the urologist