Enjoyed your work. I felt like a voyeur and the buildup was climatic in itself. Hope to read more of your work here. Very nice job, highly erotic and extremely hot.
very evocative & original!
Unusual voice to your story, and I liked it. Were you one of my students I would ask you to now write the same story from inside her head.
It had to be in the darkness, because that author didn't let us know the names of the couple involve. It was different and took time to write.
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Very nice...
Enjoyed your work. I felt like a voyeur and the buildup was climatic in itself. Hope to read more of your work here. Very nice job, highly erotic and extremely hot.
great!
very evocative & original!
Erotic and tense
Unusual voice to your story, and I liked it. Were you one of my students I would ask you to now write the same story from inside her head.
A very thin line
It had to be in the darkness, because that author didn't let us know the names of the couple involve. It was different and took time to write.
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