All Comments on 'Room 612'

by WolfgangPen

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sherlock40sherlock40almost 19 years ago
Wow, it must be a record.

She thought of her husband and kids for about 30 seconds before she cheated! That has to be a record. Usually the wives don't think of their husbands at all. Good stereotypical use of all the main players. The standard erotic story black man, the neglected slut-wife and the clueless husband. You did add that the black man had a wife in this story. She won't know that there is any difference in her husband as everyone knows that black men can fuck several times a day.

I am not a racist, I am just tired of reading the same description of the same black guy in all the different stories.

I know there won't be a second chapter where the husband catches his wife and dumps her. But that's the way I am finishing this story in my mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Very well written

Always looking for a twist, I half expected the black adonis's wife to end up sucking her husbands cum out of the white waif...or the wife waif eating black pussy as well as sucking and fucking black cock. Good story

maxwell777maxwell777almost 19 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!

Excellent story, please follow it up with another as soon as you can. Please keep the same characters in it, maybe send Rodney's wife home leaving him there alone to continue his affair with Ashley. Great story.

Thanks

John

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Family Vacation

the story was great. I thought it was written by a woman. This is a great vacation as everyone got something they wanted. The boys and husband had golf and she had sex with a huge black man. What more could a couple want for a family vacation

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
great family vacation

I sure as hell hope her husband sees the suck marks and the cum in her cunt and knows she been out fucking. When he finds out she has fucked a black man I hope he dumps her and takes the kids. Maybe she should move to the projects and keep fucking black men for a living now that she has become a whore and loves one of them. Maybe he can whore her ass out and she can even earn enough money to live on when her husband throws her ass out. It's a typical black cock story. A huge black cock making her forget all aboput the husband kids and her life. Bullshit story like all tyhe rest! But the black man's wife needs to find out too. As for the kids, hell send them out to Disneyworld again and let the white husband fuck the black woman for revenge! But have him bring a 2x4 so he doesn't fall in her cunt. If the black guy was as huge as you told us he was he'll need it!

kingsize77kingsize77almost 19 years ago
Lighten up, Anonymous!

I personally loved the story... As for anonymous and his 'bullshit' comment, what problem do you have with a big black guy fucking a married woman? Could it be that you lost someone to a guy with a bigger dick? Be a man, show your name...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great story

Very well written story. I personally would prefer a taller woman and trimmed bush instead of bald. There are so few blond women in the world that I believe that it should be a crime for them to bald their pussies and take away the pleasure of the view of a gorgeous blond trimmed bush. The story should definetly continue

Wo0odWo0odalmost 19 years ago
Great story

Good writing, good story, very descriptive and quite erotic.

gizzmo301gizzmo301almost 19 years ago
Gee

I Agree with Sherlock40. Come on if we are going to read a cheating wife story why is the guy always Black and huge and they always turn the white wife into a slut. Can't the man be Black and normal and the wife she feels no guilt... Gee the kind of women we all would love to marry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Just the Way It Is.

Don't hate. You can't get angry about a story that perfectly captures the mesmeric power and sexual potency of the Black man. Its just the way it is. Deal with it.

ryu77ryu77almost 19 years ago
He he he he!!!

Well, I don't know why I'm posting this, but it would sure be nice if this had a sequel, were the wife got pregnant by her black lover.

Now what will happen then???? HAHAHAHA!!!!! What the fuck would the cheating slut do??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
loved it

Mmmmmm, I loved it. Made me soooo wet. Wish I could have been with Rodney. Maybe another time. Love, Nancy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
cliche

when she is preggers, how will she explain it to her husband with the vasectomy? he will know, and her marraige would be over. when the black baby is born, who will support it?

if she wants excitement, to risk shattering her family and destroying her life, why not have a game of russian roulette? at least then she will not have to live with what she did.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Clever & New !

.....the parts about how her stupid husband had a vasectomy and how BIG the black guy was.. SO much bigger than her dink dicked hubby...and the black guy won't wear a condom of coursewhat a 'never thought of before' plot device!!!inspired !!!upon giving birth to a black bastard the white family will support and take care of IT perforce LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wish you hadn't gone there

WolgangPen: You do write very well, and can certainly spin an entertaining yarn. It's a shame you diluted your effort by dipping into the proverbial bag of racial stereotypes to describe 'Rodney.' It would be refreshing to read a story of this ilk wherein the Black male had normal proportions. And I'm not sure how credible 'Ashley's' actions are considering her marital history, her religious upbringing and her family's presence as well. That she would actually indulge in sex play with 'Rodney' poolside is really hard to imagine. I truly hope this tale doesn't dissolve into the all-too-plentiful theme of so many stories here: husband so quickly and willingly adopts the role of cuckold. And, W.P., remember she has her kids with her.

fumunda cheezefumunda cheezealmost 19 years ago
Poor Neglected Thing

"I'll show that Wayne. I'll have me a little pickininny so he can take care of it and send it through college. That'll teach him to play golf and to have a little dick too. Those worthless assed boys of mine, I'll show them. I'll post it all over school that their Momma likes to fuck niggers. That'll teach em to play golf and neglect their mom."

Author, if you write another chapter, please make it realistic. Maybe she does get knocked up but have the stupid motherfucker get an abortion and flush the bastard down the sewer.

It sure as hell is not right to make her husband a fucking cuke and costing him a million dollars to raise a bastard nigger because he plays golf.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
what a bunch of shit

ive been in sports and the army and seen lots of men ...its been my experience they are the same ... its just a black mans dont grow like a white mans they actually grow morw than a blacks ... after all whites are the superior race ... why else all the jealously from them ...its all the white babies we have fathered starting with jefferson go figure

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Constructively

Well written except in concept. If the womans a slut portray her as such - don't embelish with non-realities - it doesn't wear right for you as an author - especially a new one!

The beach scene was also unrealistic - no reality. Her abrupt change from goody 2 shoes won't wash. Her sexual reactions were well portrayed - hot. The pregnancy issue was overkill as was his size and her physical acceptance of it (into her belly?) - jeez cmon -

Another chapter looms but get real - her husband doesn't use a dog and cane - the conditions you described she is in will be noted by daddy. You will have 4 choices - 3 very unreal and uncomfortable for most readers. 1)Husband Cuckolding acceptance - the sickest non-reality - Move it to FETISH with pissing where it might be appreciated. 2) Husband doesn't notice - braindead pills from author work wonders but again author credibility suffers (or author doesn't give a shit for plausibility). 3) Husband becomes aware - misses force fed pills or something - He throws her out or works it out (reality) 4) She goes into the pimps harem (stupid and non-plausible given your described background).

The best answer is to end it and not deal with all the nasty sick residue - how could it get better except for the sick one's wishes for pregnancy and extended braindead fucking against the grain of plausibility. Write another perhaps more plausible story - but perhaps not eh or so you think - well its your choice. Try not to get too sick tho - most simi-normal people don't want to be totally grossed out. Perhaps the scores don't concern you but with the talent displayed so far you should be interested in buiding a solid simi-normal following - just about anyone can develope a sick jaded one.

Think about it.

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
hard to comment

It is hard to comment, since she need a fucking. she had to be looking trough a magnifying glass to call those shots on how his penis looked or felt. It like when you have an ache or pain it is the biggest hurting your mind until you get relief. After you got the relief you come back down to ground you realize it was't so bad after all.

fakers51fakers51almost 19 years ago
hard to comment

It is hard to comment, since she need a fucking. she had to be looking trough a magnifying glass to call those shots on how his penis looked or felt. It like when you have an ache or pain it is the biggest hurting your mind until you get relief. After you got the relief you come back down to ground you realize it was't so bad after all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good story

You should of added the black wife.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Another great story

The sex was very good but the only thing that would make the story hotter is if you described the sex in a little more detail. I want to hear how he's pounding her pussy, I want it described. Doing that would make both this story and your nonconsent one an awesome read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Bullshit

Fuck all Canadians that criticize what others have to say. Did you leave your name? You asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
PREG....

I thought you did a great job on this story. I can't find too much to critisize. I love this sort of story line especially where the wife is totally taken in her desires and looses all restraint of her marriage vows. I thought you did a great job with her reluctance. I especially like your detail of how he did not care she was not on birth control and he pumped all his seed into her. I love stories of impregnation and you are off to a great start. I thought that his harsh attitude after he fucked her was not good. But if you please continue this story with her getting pregnent or make new stories with interatial impreg i'd really appreciate it. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
one of the best I have read

I have been reading cockold / interracial stories for years and this was one of the best I have ever read. Alot of the negative responses are from people who do not enjoy this genre. This story had some cliques but it had believablity if you wanted to enjoy it. And no one can deny it had passion like most stories never dreamed of. I could smell her heat from the screen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Seduction abounds

Looking forward to another story with the thread of seduction in it. I often come back to this one after skimming thelatest stories, most of which are wham bang, etc.

Try another; you are good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
MORE

how about a sequel. 9 months later and Ashley is pregnate with a black child

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another cunt story

Another whore wife that cheats on her husband story. They should all be shot for cheating.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great story

This was a great story. I love the story line. I would hope you continue with the story where this one left off. How did she explain or hide her hickeys? How long was it before her desires took over and she hooked up again? Tell us how she handled her pregnancy with her hubby? I hope you will continue the story with chapters 2, 3, and????

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Magnificent

Everyone who liked the story wants a sequel. Me, too. Get her husband,and later, her boys into it. Remember another story of how the seducer, and his wife, kept score on how many white wives he knocked up. Boy, you have a lot of options to continue.

You are good. Keep it up. And keep the rest of us up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
hot shit

tHIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES i HAVE READ IN lITERORTICA

GOOD SHIT AND YES KEEP GOG MAN

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
hey I have an idea why not have the husband see

what a whore his wife really is. let him see the marks on her body that the nigger made. then let him see the cum running out of her very stretched cunt. Then let him push her whroing white ass out the 6th floor window and kill the cheating slut. or let her be knowcked up and her husband leave her whoreing ass out in the cold. He should take everyhting including her children and let her go looking for another nigger to live with. She is used good now anyway.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
room 612

This was a hot and very sexual story. I would like to hear more about this meeting. Did they get together again? Did she have his baby?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Ashley the whore

This is one of the best that I have read. I was horny from the beginning to the end of it. Well done, well written. Horny as hell. Thank you for sharing this story with us readors of Literotica.

simjim100simjim100about 17 years ago
Loved your story

I am amazed over the negative comments some people make. I can't help but wonder what sort of stories they expect to see and even though this was an excellent tale it was still pretty plain from the beginning where it was going. So, since I assume we are all adults here, I should also be able to assume we all know what we like and don't like. Point is, why read a story which you should know up front is going to be a problem for you. Interracial infidelity seems to piss folks off like no other. I personally find it to be the most erotic story line going. This particular story was not only well written but very believable. I don't know that it needs a sequel, seems to stand alone as an excellent work, however I would definitely like to see more from this fine author. Thanks for a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fantastic

loved the story wish I could be in the role of Ashley

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awesome

Great story! Would love to read chapters 2 and 3 ...

Keep UP the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I'm 47 white married ,Mom and had a similar experience. I still recall fondly how my black lover did things to me my husband has never been able to do. Please write more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
BIATCH

ASH IS A BIATCH, I LOVE THEM BIATCH, I FUCK EM BIATCH TOO, THIS STORY WILL MAKE A WONDERFUL PORNO MOVIE.

steviecomsteviecomabout 14 years ago
Good Story!!

Wow!! that was a hot story, very good.

mospropheticmospropheticabout 14 years ago
Bravo my brother

Like I said before, instant classic, one of my favorites!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great story

very hot, when will we know what happened to ashley.

will the boys get a little "brother"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
nice

WHY DONT YOU HONOR US AND SUBMIT CHAPTER 2 THE GIVE BACK..THE HUSBAND HAS A BONUS CHILD OF HIS OWN WHICH GAVE HIM THE IDEA OF HAVING VASECTOMY..THE ADONIS SISTER LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
The missing tongue

Me myself looks like Ashley ..same age two children,If i met that man I would like him to taste my pussy till I come on his throbing tongue and big lips

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wish There Was a Part 2

Wish you would have continued with this story......WOW

Tim413413Tim413413over 9 years ago
Very well done.

A few spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors, but not to the point of being gosh-awful. Rodney - "You will never crave your husband again after I get done fucking you." Ashley - "I can live with that for 30 or 40 years." This might be a perfect example why I prefer Loving Wives stories. Here, we are reasonably certain Hubby will figure out what happened. In a similar LW story, we'd generally have much more to read after Wifey returned to their suite.

shvg65shvg65over 8 years ago
Pretty good story

It was a good story up until the size of his cock. Not very many men have 8 inches, let alone 13 (9 inches plus she could put her hand around what was left). Next story try to be a little more accurate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
How did she enjoy the

Divorce?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SuzyRox

I go to Myrlte Beach all the time. Wish I could find that Big Black Cock to stuff my bald white pussy. And maybe even my little white ass.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Veronique

I found this story exiciting. I have experienced similar things. The only difference is that my husband watches me in the bar while I am being hit on. Then once I go to a hotel room I let him listen in on the action. Afterwards I desrcribe my adventure in detail. We usually both come when I tell him how it feels to have a stranger's dick enter me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Of course

Of course, a black man asks "whose the best?"

954Hard954Hardover 2 years ago

Hot story. How can she settle for her little dick hubby after this?

bizarrpaarbizarrpaarabout 1 year ago

I cheated on my husband on our honeymoon in Jamaica....could not resist the muscular black alphas with their huge oiled large cocks

AnonymousAnonymous22 days ago

Moją kochaną i jedyną kobietę obsługuje już ponad 14 lat ogromny czarny samiec , swoim potężnym chujem . Jesteśmy z nim bardzo zaprzyjaźnieni , do tego stopnia , że popsuł pipkę mojej żony już trzy razy i po naszym mieszkaniu i ogrodzie biega trzech czarnych łobuzów . Są zdrowi , silni i kochamy ich nad życie . namawiam moją żonę , aby dała się powalić murzynowi czwarty raz . Ona się ze mną droczy ale widzę , że jest chętna tym bardziej , że gdy ona nosi w brzuszku czarne dziecko , to ja bardzo o nią dbam . Po każdym ruchaniu murzyna jego wielkim chujem i zniszczeniu pipki mojej żony i w końcu zalaniem gęstym , gorącym afrykańskim juksem , zlizuję z jej pipki to , co wypłynie a murzyn rucha mi żonę zawsze kiedy chce i zawsze jego juks wypełnia jej śliczną pipkę . Czekam teraz na dobrą nowinę od mojej żony i na rosnący pomału jej brzuszek .

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