All Comments on 'YMCA Shower Turns Me Into Hot Wife'

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kafkafover 5 years ago
Come on!

Badly written garbage.

Plurals never ever have apostrophes, but you use several, apparently at random.

"one bug push" is nonsense.

Xzy89c1Xzy89c1over 5 years ago
How bad

Hey lets rape my wife!! She could have gone crazy when she realized what was happenning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Inconsistant

After you fuck Tim and Ron, you say you've always fantasized about a threesome, however you already had a threesome months before with Jason and Ron

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Loved your story and I really don’t care about the errors that are being pointed out. Now, here’s a man who truly loves his wife and appreciates the fact how lucky he is to have a slut wife!

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
YMCA

A good story 4****s

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Ok because of requests here is a bit about me (us). I'm a 50 something female about 5'3" tall and 120 pounds. I've been married to my honey for 25+ years and we have great sex. I'm not a model but I get my fair share of attention even at my age. I do most of the writing bu...